It was kinda strange, I must say, but a good story non the less. I have to say, I do like it.

Oh my god. If any other writer wrote with that style...honestly, I would give them serious proofreading suggestions. But the way you wrote it...you were portraying Link as such an idiot that it was hilariously funny, and although the words sounded stupid, they were perfect for their specific location...and intelligently placed. Amazing job!

yes now I'll totallt agree that link is dense, but don't you think Zelda is a little bit more? LOL

Haha. This was pretty funny... poor Link though. I can kinda see where you're trying to go with that type of writing style. It's different, but change it good. Great job. bye!

Aww, poor Link. This one reminds me of Memoirs of a Boyfriend. You can't help but feel sorry for the poor guy! He can never seem to get it right...

poor link he can't say he loves her and she keeps thinking he's breaking up with her!

Great start, I'll fav this and await for more.

HAHAHAH dude i can totally relate to link right there! f**kn' funny stuff right there, dude. write more!

hope that new story comes out pretty damn soon. nothin' else to read around here other than your fics, dude

VERY cute, Joshizzle! You have to write another oneshot like this. Poor Link, hopefully he'll get it right. Someday.

...OH WAIT, there's "Just a Little Bit!"

-Tripod Baby

Yet another amusing and well-written oneshot, SJ. Can't wait for Circles.

An excellent way to start of 2008. :)

I LOVED reading the laid back narration you tried to go for. But if I could suggest something: try tweaking the beginning a little, so that it matches with the end. It starts off formal, but then it transitions into the slang. Just thought you might want to fix that.

I'm definitely looking forward to Circles, Josh! I've been reading the blog regularly, and I love what you have so far! Don't keep us waiting now, you hear? :D

And I'll try to watch that movie. Unless you wanna hook me up, right? XD

thats pretty funny dude i gotta say... it could be worse tho... whenever i tell the girl i like that "i love you" she just says "i know" and walks off... so for all you dudes out there... trying to ask out a waitress at your job is a bad idea... especially when they make WAY more money than you

p.s. she still doesnt belive me... >:O

Lol, funny as. Poor Link ~ =P

Oh, it ends there? Too bad we can't know if Link finally managed to tell Zelda the magical words.
But on the other side, it's a good end, because it makes the reader imagine his/her own end to it.

Very very good, as I always expect from you!

Haha, that's funny. ^^