|Reviews for Knight Errand|
| cakelesspixels 5/5/13 . chapter 2
I've been taking forever in reading! I'm sorry! I'm liking the bond between these two. :)
It's also nice to see you didn't forget about Antoine's flaws. ;) I knew you wouldn't, but it's still refreshing to see a story that doesn't demonize a character or erase his flaws. It's also good to see him learning from them already. Stormblaze makes a good buddy for him.
| cakelesspixels 4/12/13 . chapter 1
I just started reading and it's off to a really good start! :) It's nice to see Antoine getting some love lol. I'm looking forward to seeing how this progresses. Keep up the good work!
| TammyHybrid21 3/20/13 . chapter 17
Antoine! Oh no, oh no, this looks bad. Also I knew that someone was going to yank on the chain eventually.
Ha Antoine's rematch with the spider was every bit as exhilarating as I expected it to be. That was awesome and he also managed to hold his own, at least until that cat showed up and took away his edge.
Oh, I hope that they can manage to get out of this situation it looks quite dangerous, also they shouldn't have written Antoine off quite so fast should've they.
Also sorry for taking so long, I had a few things going on...
| TammyHybrid21 2/3/13 . chapter 16
First things first, I am terribly sorry for going and disappearing off the face of the Earth and taking so long to review.
Anyway... on to the actual review! This chapter was actually quite intimidating (Spelling?) to me, the general tone that is.
Several times I had to stop and have a break before continuing on with reading, because I kept getting the feeling that something bad was going to happen. Of course in the end nothing did but man you and that evil cliff-hanger.
I liked the lead-in to the chapter with Stormblaze's fear in full force and Antoine doing a little reminiscing(?) about the past.
I laughed when they both tried the food that turned out to be far too spicy for them... that would have been me as well.
Luis was an interesting character himself, I do feel sorry for him about his niece been taken. The bit where Antoine tried to help him out was a nice touch as well.
Get to writing the next chapter quickly! I want to know what they hear?
| Save Fearow 12/29/12 . chapter 15
I think this a wonderful story so far and commend you on writing something so epic. I don't think Stormblaze will be eating anyone, despite his misgivings about air travel. Ha! And I thought you did a very good portraying little Antoine, from all I've seen he was never a really snooty child, maybe a bit timid now and then, but generally seemed to enjoy running and playing with the other children. I don't think he really adopted that stand-offish attitude until after Robotnik/Eggman took over. (And I think part of that had to do with him being older than the others, he was old enough to be frightened by the changes, cognizant of his former lifestyle, and perhaps most importantly old enough to feel as though he should've made more of a difference)
| TammyHybrid21 11/9/12 . chapter 15
Nobody would logically be like Draco Malfoy, good example BTW.
Uh so Stormblaze is scared of flying, no shame in that. I'm scared of heights and have problems with vertigo myself.
Reading about the Sword of Light I thought of the movie/show/book "Sword in the Stone" it was just simmilar.
Also I liked the flashback/dream sequence.
| TammyHybrid21 9/3/12 . chapter 14
Yeah this was an amazing chapter, caught me a bit off guard at first... In English I was surprised at first then calmly accepted it.
OMG Stormblaze got shot, now that would have been shocking indeed, also what a neat way to get Fiona caught!
Looks like Antoine and Barkerville have warmed up to each other. I also really enjoyed the line where Stormblaze was talking about the job of being a servant and not wishing it upon anyone except his worst enemies was funny.
You mentioned Fang, don't go thinking that I didn't pick that up... also sorry for not reviewing straight away life happens you know, especially school.
| TammyHybrid21 8/20/12 . chapter 13
Ahh now that would have been quite an interesting sight to witness if we were able to. Yes that was heavy on the action even if it was only fighting a mundo freaky robot, I've got to stop thinking/speaking like Sonic when I get really excited. Hmm I wonder what's going to happen next especially since the enemy is still observant.
Antoine still has a lot to learn apparently and also is starting to lose a bit of his control. I hope that Stormblaze can help him understand just how important it is to retain control over himself. That voice is starting to annoy me... I wonder if Antoine finds it annoying at all?
Oh man electricity and there is the background on the gloves, I haven't been electrocuted myself but I have seen one of my friends touch a live electric fence wire by accident one. Not fun, I'm glad Stormblaze was able to recover quick enough, though not quick enough for Antoine I'd think.
Just a heads up (mentioned on my forum as well) but in about two weeks time I'm planning on changing my pen-name to TammyHybrid21. Thankyou.
| TammyHybrid21 6/24/12 . chapter 12
I had a feeling that Fiona was up to no good. Now Antoine's in trouble and Stormblaze doesn't even know about it.
I liked the little guitar lesson at the start shows a little bit more about Trip and a little bit about Antoine himself.
I must say the bit where Antoine lunged at the bad guys because they were laughing at him caught me way off guard.
I think the inner voice that Ant keeps hearing is actually his new found powers trying to control him after all didn't the Thunderbird issue a warning about that.
| TammyHybrid21 5/26/12 . chapter 11
Looks like Antoine's really getting caught up in temptations trap.
Wonder what Anubia's thinking when she watches the two?
Stormblaze is going to have to remind Antoine of what they're doing.
You mentioned the Nasty Hyenas! Ant didn't mention his own run in with them (obviously).
Well can't wait to see what happens next.
| TammyHybrid21 4/14/12 . chapter 9
I'm still guessing that they're going to encounter another legend or something that seems to refer directly to Antoine and Luna still acts slightly like Amy Rose in more subtle ways though.
What are Ant's powers exactly?
I'll just wait and see but that questions keeps coming up as well as how fate is playing out for them. It'd be interesting if they encountered someone directly linked to the past though or another legend that points towards them. And there would've had to have been more to the Skinwalker legend than they were letting on I think.
His eyes what happend to his eyes did they get that kind of sparkle that shows that you are more than you look or something?
I wonder... Lupe has to be hiding something...
| TammyHybrid21 4/14/12 . chapter 8
Character Bashing? Naw it doesn't come across like that to me in fact to me it makes sense after all the Skinwalker was trying to agravate Antoine so it makes sense.
Did the Skinwalker evesdrop on them earlier is that why he targeted Antoine? Was there another legend centred around the defeat of the Skinwalker? (That'd be interesting to find out) Will I stop asking so many questions? (Yes) only the author truley knows. Just one last thing with one of his statements what exactly was he messing up when he said "like a million trucks"?
| TammyHybrid21 4/14/12 . chapter 7
Hmm and we all should know who that really is apart from Antoine of course. *shaves head slightly* the way Luna was acting reminded me a bit of Amy Rose and her pursuits of Sonic.
Um neat chapter I've had several day dreams already to do with the sorraxes and the Skinwalker thanks to this story.
| TammyHybrid21 4/14/12 . chapter 6
Well here we go again with Antoine getting ahead of himself just a bit...
Bridges I agree swear off bridges they can be scary and too high.
Liked the "wouldn't dream of it" part because a lot of people when they are in danger seem to shout that out.
| TammyHybrid21 4/14/12 . chapter 5
Could he be scared of them slightly because of only Diablo or maybe there was something more making him scared.
Or perhaps he's just nervous that they remembered the 'CURSE' (seen the episode or read the comics you'll get the referance) and how he'd reacted while he had been with them last time.
Deep Power stones? Deep Power Stones? wait aren't they in SATam and the Freedom Fighters use them to finally defeat Robotnik?