 SufferingThePretences 2009-10-03 . chapter 1That kinda depressed me. ]= I expected a happy ending, but it was more angsty. DX
I think you should continue this one, maybe make it a Double-shot.
SufferingThePretences - Signing Out |
 Arcellant 2008-01-23 . chapter 1Really nice! Too bad you're not continuing it... XP |
 Kurotorachan 2008-01-18 . chapter 1sad but oddly beautiful |
 DTGC 2008-01-16 . chapter 1Uhm...
Dib is really pathetic...My soul aches for him.
angsty an...well I can't even write. Really emotional. I like how you had the fireworks symbolize things for Dib.
I wonder what would happen to Dib if Zim left, and this is a pretty accurate summary. Just a big angst-fest.
Meh. I'm depressed now. |
 Adder of the Pit 2008-01-15 . chapter 1I like this story. It really captures the true meaning of ZADF. When I read the title, it reminded me of the Phantom of the Opera song, Wishing You Were Somehow Here Again. |
 ARandomFangirl 2008-01-15 . chapter 1I love this story! It may be a drabble, but you describe so much about Zim and Dib's lives together. It's almost like you took a small segment of a larger story, or at least, it could be a part of a larger story. I also like the way you ended it. It leaves it open, rather than Zim coming back, which is refreshing. I tend to be a fan of things working out in the end, but realistically, it doesn't always happen. So, overall, awesome job! ^_^ |
 MadeUpFigment 2008-01-15 . chapter 1Typos/Errors
-tell me to come on, moron, get in, you dont have all day.-
Dont should be don't.
That is all.
I also cried reading this. It's hard to imagine Dib absolutely hopeless without tearing up a little. It makes me want to smack Zim over the head and yell "go back and get him!".
What makes this all the sadder is knowing Zim will never come back and Dib is stuck on that stupid planet.
I liked how Dib associated the colors of the fireworks with Zim. Creative.
Dammit, now I'm crying. Good job on the story.
-A crappy reviewer |
 Skandragon Blackheart 2008-01-15 . chapter 1That would suck, poor Dib. Hay, you should write a sequel of Zim coming back to Earth... or not. Just seems like a good idea... |
 piloneo 2008-01-15 . chapter 1Oh, man. That would stink so bad, not being able to see the stars. I feel so bad for Dib now T_T
But it was a really really really good fic. ^_^ |