are you ever going to finsih this story? i really would love to read more of your writing!

Mac been arrested! I can wait to see what's going to happen! Are you going to continue it? oh pls! I loved your story "the beginnings", actually i have loved them all! Pls continue it!

What the hell?

WHAT THE HELL?

Since WHEN? This is absolutely NOTHING like the last time you had this story up. I think I might know where this is going... and I hope I'm right... But if not, this is crazy! Wow, how much has changed!

Did I mention I love you? I do! A whole lot! And so do Casey, Emerson, and Ceron. Can't wait to see where this is going!

Xoxo

Theo

soo. i'm very happy that you're writing a sequal to Beginnings, so happy. although I have no idea what happened in this chapter but i'm hoping its some ploy to get mac home in time, hehe.

Wow! I want to know what is going on. This story is very interesting, please update us soon.

Oh

That was amazing.

I'm intrigued to find out whats going on. Please don't leave it too long for an update.

Yeah! Sequel to Beginnings! I love ya Mac! :)

Great first chapter! I can't believe Mac's getting arrested ... I can't wait for read more and see what happened!

WHOA!

Ahnifty! (Nifty times a million.)

Wow! Mac getting arrested? I love it! It's mazing!