| Reviews for Broken Secrets and Forgotten Memories |
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Lunar Cresta 4/5/11 . chapter 12I was quite enjoying this story, but it seems to be ended for now. That is too bad. Well, it was good and fun while it lasted. I like the character interactions. It was a good job :) |
Sharpi 1/3/11 . chapter 1Addictive reading. Thanks for this great story. |
Amy 12/6/10 . chapter 11 Love it, more please! |
Nicholai Jones 11/13/10 . chapter 1Why is their no updates to this. Continue this man! Don't leave it hanging. |
Techno Skittles 11/6/10 . chapter 3Me again! I thought this chapter was great and I only spotted one thing that really bothered me. It doesn't take three hours to travel ten miles. In fact, cars can go way faster than that. My only advice is to extend the miles so the hours make sense. You'll probably ignore this, but I just had to get that off my chest. |
Techno Skittles 11/6/10 . chapter 2I like it, I really do. I'm not sure whether you read the book or watched the movie (perhaps both?). But since I've only seen the movie, Robert seems off to me. Probably because I keep thinking of him as Will Smith and it didn't seem that he acted this way in the movie. Idk. Don't pay attention to me. Just keep writing it the way you are. |
XBrokenInHalfX 7/30/10 . chapter 10OMFG WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED. YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS RIGHT NOW. DON'T STOP, PLS WHAT HAPPENED TO ROBERT! I HAVE TO KNOW! |
TheViolentFemme 1/11/10 . chapter 10OMG please finish this I love this story! |
electrogirl88 11/21/09 . chapter 9This story is really good. I wish you would update it. |
lily 7/30/09 . chapter 9 i love so... You can't stop here! |
thedruidprincess 5/16/09 . chapter 9awesome! cant wait for more! :) update soon! |
xYourLoveIsMyDrugx 1/27/09 . chapter 9Oh My Gosh! That was so intense! Ah! Please update soon! Great job! -SavingOurAnimals- |
MissUrbanWriter 1/19/09 . chapter 1Mean cliffhanger, eh? But the opportunity was too good to resist. I myself don't know what I'm going to write for the next chappie but I have an inkling. I will give you two hints that will keep my faithful readers (all of you) something to mull over while I'm typing up the tenth chapter (if that's the next chapter I'm on). Darkness and Death. Those are the hints and now, decide. |
x.Shadowz Arrow.x 1/19/09 . chapter 9Argh! I am so happy that this story is back on. whop! Oh my god! What happened! I hope everything's gonna be ok... |
supernaturalobbsessed 1/19/09 . chapter 9pLZ UPDATE SOON |