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| XxBrooklynnxX 2008-07-22 ch 5,  | abuseWonderful chapter. You never fail to dissapoint. And thank you so much for the dedication. My wrist is all healed up now, although I won't be able to update now because of the move xD Keep it up, CJ! |
| Raven Hufflepuff 2008-07-03 ch 3, | abuseI really can see Zac Efron as Peter Parker/Spider-man. |
| Raven Hufflepuff 2008-07-03 ch 2, | abuseI like this story! |
| DJ Shortstop Clue 2008-06-06 ch 5, | abuseFirst and foremost, let me just say the fight scene was so dope! this is a bad ** story, CJ! keep up the good work, man!! |
| JuseaPeterson 2008-06-05 ch 5, | abuseI loved the fight scene, except for all the violence it made me smile, you know what I mean right? I loved the banter and what Peter was saying. I think you did a great job with Jameson, he was funny. Can't wait til I read more. And I think I know who the girl is... |
| adogg5117 2008-06-04 ch 5, | abuseNice! Very innovative as far as fighting goes, not to mention a good touch of comedy! Very true to Spidey himself...! "That's it, Get him?! Wow, you know how to write an Oscar winner, huh Wolfy?" Love that line XD Please, update soon P.S. I'm still working on the new chapter on Ultimate Rebel, stay tuned ^^ Still wanna see more of your work though |
| mdizzle 2008-06-04 ch 5, | abuseNice work with smart mouth, it sounded as if he were actually saying it himself. So which girl is going to show up first MJ or Felicia |
| XxBrooklynnxX 2008-05-23 ch 4, | abuseGreat work here. I'm excited to see how you're going to write up the bad guys--I'm sure you'll get them in character just as well as everyone else. |
| adogg5117 2008-05-17 ch 4, | abuseSWET! Great retelling of Spidey's origin, very dramatic and heart felt. Also, funny stuff with Crusher ^_^ Please, update soon, I can't wait to see what happens with the 100 Jade Syndicate members! |
| mdizzle 2008-05-14 ch 4, | abuseYou goofed on the prices better back check. But you kept the tragedy true that's what matters |
| JuseaPeterson 2008-05-14 ch 4, | abuseWow, I like how you went through the rest of Peter's youth, although it's still sad about Ben. Gotta love the mention of Stan Lee. :) Great job in going through him going after the thief and how Peter felt. I like how you explained what Peter did afterwards to try and make up for what had happened. Thanks for the update and can't wait for more. |
| JuseaPeterson 2008-05-06 ch 3, | abuseI like how you showed him getting bit and then what he went through afterwards. It was sad that Ben had to die. I wonder what's going to be happening in the next chapters. |
| adogg5117 2008-05-04 ch 3, | abuseGreat job on this one, CJ. You show Peter's guilt very well in this when he loses his Uncle, and on a light hearted tale, I got to see one of my new favorite lines... Peter: STICKING TO A WALL?! And Spidey about to fight 99 guys, this I have to see! Update soon |
| mdizzle 2008-05-04 ch 3, | abuseSo you are going to show when he becomes a wrestler |
| DJ Shortstop Clue 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseeffin BAD ** story CJ! sorry i never got a chance to review!! I cant wait to read the other two chapters. i gotta get back to my homework. take care man!! |