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| Ewanlover64 2008-01-17 ch 1,  | abuseI think this is one of your best works yet. It was nice to see the conflict inside of Julia about losing Kaidan; I felt it was very realistic and well executed. Also, this line really stuck out to me: "Spirits, Kaidan, you nearly took ten years off my life." That line alone told so much about your character, I felt, because of just how in-character it was. Maybe it was just me, but I loved it. :) Definitely a great job! You captured Kaidan very well and I hope to see more from you in the future! :) |
| NChawk 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseI can really see the hurt that Julia is feeling with the lost of Kaidan. That bond between twins is already a tight one, but to loose someone who reminds you so much of a twin lost is truly an emotion roller coaster. Another great piece of work. |
| VoiDreamer 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuse^_^ Another lovely one, the scene down at Virmire was especially well written - nicely done! Again, your range of emotion gets to me...so deep! :) Keep up the great work! |
| The Great D 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseanother goodie, I'm interested to see what happens with Garrus now |
| Vampirika 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseAs I've discovered most of your work is, this is amazing. I love your work! |
| Chaosian 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely awesome. :) |
2008-01-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou can really feel Shepard's and Kaiden's relationship, how he loved her while she thought of him as a brother. I also like the Native American commandments, I always like learning new stuff about them and it helps Julia's character as well. |