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| DianaUchiha 2008-05-14 ch 5, | abuseWOW! This is amazing It's so perfect You have to write more! YOu just have to |
| DianaUchiha 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseWow! This is amazing! I love it! |
| fastforwarddd 2008-04-12 ch 4, | abuseWell you can't just leave it there! haha great story, really like how this one is going. please update soon! |
| writersblock142 2008-02-10 ch 3, | abuseplease ud asap! x |
| Willofthewisp 2008-01-28 ch 2, | abuseThis shows a lot of promise. I didn't think it was too OOC. Hyde is more affectionate when he's drunk. I've seen a clip of him kissing Kelso I think when he was drunk...on the cheek. And Jackie, well, I would be mad too if my ex was at my door drunk expecting to be let in. Her dialogue is very good. I'm anxious to see where this will go. |
| Zeppleingirl08 2008-01-23 ch 2, | abuserock on jackie! finally she stands up for herself! :D great job. |
| Zeppleingirl08 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseim interested. continue. |
| teart 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseWow, I liked this. I hope you plan on continuing, its good. |