Aww too bad. I was really looking forward to reading the rest.
Are you still going to write for another fandoms?

aw, disband storm hawks? no,




BUT PLEASE CONTINUE!

Aww, crap! Dx I thought there were more chapters then this! Dang! D= But even if there aren't right now, the two up now (as in chapter one and two) are awesome! I don't really care for either Piper and Stork, or Piper and Aerrow together, but if you continue this, I might just have to look for some more StorkxPiper fanfics ;D As for the Dark Ace and Aerrow together? Love it. That could easily be just because I'm so obsessed with yaoi, slash, whatever you want to call it, though x3 And you're really good at writing, too! =D Especially so because English isn't your first language. Awesome story so far, I really hope you continue ^^

An awesome story so far. A few spelling mistakes, but you said English is your second launguage? If so, then hell, you are doing a damn good job! UPDATE SOON !

One Word : Continue.

Don't try and drop it. You'll see I can...easily persuade...*laughs evily, Melokoyla backs away*

I think you should definately carry on. I want to see Dark Ace and Aerrow fall in love with each other! The relationship is so cute. Its brilliant so far, i keep coming on your story to check if you wrote any more! Cant wait for the next chapter if you decide to do it, i hope you do. I will also be on the lookout for any more of your Fan Fictions. I am behind you 1oo% if anyone writes any haters just ignore them! Though i dont see why they should, your story rocks!

HELL yes!

*GASP* YES you should! will she dropped the cup? Hm? and I really really can't wait for more!!

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Ack! I'll die if you don't continue. I love the angst, love love love it! Oh, the generic tragic love story- gilr loves boy but thinks boy doesn't care about her and vice-versa. But you've made it anything but generic. It's brilliant! Please keep going with this, I must know what happens next!
And a good scene between Aerrow and the Ace. I am more of a FinnxStork fan when it comes to slash, but this isn't too bad either. Not bad at all...

* stares at screen* disband the storm hawks? Radar's big goodbye party? this story is twisted... and I like it. Update as soon as you can.

What?! Disband the Storm Hawks?! OMG! Piper better not even think of it!! Gotta update soon.

what?

D-d-disband the Storm Hawks?

Oh hayell no.

Man, you're breaking my balls. XD But I really hope Piper doesn't even CONSIDER taking on Stork's idea. I think its damn sad how there's a relationship going on, but it means nothing to either of them if its anything beyond friendship. Now...a relationship consisting of friendship is nice, but gah...they need to stop lying to themselves. Its so freaking obvious that Stork wants her (and vice versa)...and I would have THOUGHT that it was freaking obvious that Aerrow wanted the Dark Ace; I mean, c'mon, thats so evident. XD Sorry, this turned into a long unhelpful rant.

Anyways, I'm really happy you updated.

This can't be the end, it simply can't be! We can't just crush Stork like that! :*( anywho awsome job, and you really really MUST continue, please?

DAMN you're evil!

JUST LIKE EVERY OTHER ONE OF YOU DAMN PEOPLE WHO KILLS STORK'S HEART!

I ** HATE YOU ALL!

(*ahem*) Yeah, great story though. I promise not to kill you... just yet.

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