MOREE! I loved it so far!

ah, i see long time no update
still fantastically curious;
does it say something about me if i love suicide!fics?
perhaps, perhaps.

i hope to see more soon. :)

Nice chapter. :D
Axel is one confusing guy. ^.^

This story, is absolutely fantastic.

I am DYING to read more of it. You've completely sucked me in and got me hooked, and I impatiently await an update of this amazing story.

loved it!

update soon please

^^

I give this story an epic win so far! ^_^ I keep forgetting to review but I have been reading it since the begining...and I really really like it! I can't wait till the next chapter.

Oops, sorry this is so late T.T But I'm so happy I finally got around to reading it! I love this fic so much and I missed it so. This chapter was just so awesome and Roxas' confession just brought tears to your eyes :( It was so beautiful T.T I love that Axel saved him though, kudos to Axel for being awesomely awesome. Aw... you're sick, I hope you feel better. I hate being sick, it just sucks **.
Oh, I know what you mean about the voice acting, I was so looking forward to Quinton Flynn, and in all honesty, I don't think he did that well. The first word he said was um... strange, not Axel like at all. I'm sad to admit that I'm disappointed in my man at the moment. But just being able to see Axel makes everything ok though. Plus, you get to play as Riku, so that's the **.
Anyway, I really look forward to more of this buddy, I'm addicted to it qutie badly, your writing is just skilled like that.

-Riku-stalker

im so glad the Roxas confessed that he didnt want to die. Axel will protect him and keep him sane. hope you feel better soon!

This chapter is simply too beautiful for words. There is no way in my range of vocabulary can I even begin to explain how this made me feel. Roxas's emotions, Axel's determination, and how they seem to clash at every moment.

I even stood up when Axel caught him in mid flight to the edge.
You've really outdid yourself on this chapter Kokoro, truly you have.

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I started to play the game right?
I own it for the GBA and I kinda gave up on that version, so I'm gonna play it right through for the PS2 one.
My only complaint is that they used Sora's mature voice for his little kid body, and the fact they got Axel's undertone all wrong. The voice is okay but it just bugs me beyond belief.

Oh well, maybe it's just me...

In any case, good work!
I hope to read another of your chapters soon.
Till Next Time

- Salioka

so he finaly admits he doesn't want to die? interesting... when is axel going to tell roxas that that was his plan all along? well i guess i'll just have to wait... unfortunatly... until next time! :)

Augh this chater describes my feelings exactly right now! It's so scary how much this is like me.. A little different story, but besides that it's just very close to the way my life is right now.

I love this! Please write more soon :)

This story is great. I love how Axel works to push Roxas' buttons and making it for his own good. Wonder when Roxas will see just how much Axel really likes him and cares about him. My only question is why Axel had been trying to jump before hand? You never said, but he sure seemed to change his mind about it easily after meeting Roxas. Or at least I think he changed his mind? Love to you for the story. I'll be looking forward to reading more. Bye.

Oh wow. Just in such a short time Rox got attached, just a little, semi bit. And Axel, oh I love that man til the day the earth ends and even after that. He's just pretty much amazing :D I hope you're better by now, it sucks being sick, and if you aren't better, then please heal fast!

I love this story! I can't wait till you update. :D