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BetahimeTsukiko
2009-10-24 . chapter 1
So, cute! I really hope that you continue soon! It sounds like a really awesome story, the way Naruto-kun's mom is Itachi-chan's sensei. I really, really, really want to see how this fleshes out. Have an awesome day, ja ne!
Dimly
2008-05-22 . chapter 1
This looks interesting! Please add more soon. :D
JapanManiac
2008-05-22 . chapter 1
Poor Minato is going Bankrupt! this story is so amazing that Update is a very Must!
I <3 ur story
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
wow...I love the way you write and made Kushina-sama kick ass!

Please continue^^
Aki WildQueen
2008-05-04 . chapter 1
This story is great!
I really like this story as much as your other Naruto fanfic. You're a really good writer. I can't wait until you update so please update soon?
P.S. Mr. Bunny loves your writing!
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HarbringerLady
2008-04-16 . chapter 1
damn, if Minato thought feeding Kushina for a month will bankrupt him, what will happen when they married? That's like feeding her forever ^^
Viktor Mayrin
2008-03-20 . chapter 1
*blinks*

Wow.

I love it.

A lot.

And the concept is amazing! Keep it up!
Cybertoy00
2008-03-11 . chapter 1
This is a great story, it's nice to see Kushina depicted in a manner similar to the way I would.(Read Quest for Mama, my fic) I have but one error to note.
Itachi has just graduated, right? When Fugaku taught Sasuke(same age Itachi is now) the Fireball technique, he said Itachi didn't master it until he was older, so why does he know it now?
ANyway, ganbatte!
waiting4morning
2008-03-09 . chapter 1
Very nice start! I like the way you characterize Kushina. It'll be interesting to see how Itachi becomes the psycho we know him to be despite Kushia's... um... tender loving care? LOL

A couple of minor grammatical nits: you use "then" several times when it should be "than". Also, remember that apostrophes show possession and are not to be used to pluralize a word. Such as "a few more book's" should be "a few more books".

Anyway, well done. I look forward to the next chapter.
singeivoire
2008-03-03 . chapter 1
Good Kushina fics are hard to find, but I liked this. Well done!

One comment - you may want to explain Kushina's blind fighting style before she gets too Sue-ish.

I look forward to the next installment!
Gawdzilla
2008-02-17 . chapter 1
I think you might have a epic story on your hands. This has an original premise and two main character that most of Naurto fans love. Mind you that we've only seen Kushina once...but anyway great job and i looked forward to reading more chapters if you update the story.
Orochimarisu
2008-02-08 . chapter 1
Oh I LOVE this fic! It shows Itachi as how I imagined him, and actualy also how I think off Kushina... ^_^ Darn good job!
La Wei
2008-01-22 . chapter 1
This was a really cute chapter. gah! I love how you portray Kushina and I'm so glad it was such a long chapter too! I can't wait for the next one. The way you develop the character's personalities is amazing; Kushina is such a strong character in both mind and body and you, as the author, make it believable and not overly used. Minato is also something to admire! He's not overly affectionate, but he does seem like the person that was portrayed in the Kakashi Gaiden. I can't wait for the next chapter really!
Good luck!
Tetsukon
2008-01-22 . chapter 1
Very cool.
Quathis
2008-01-19 . chapter 1
Good story with enganging characters with an unkown entity possibly altering all we know of the Naruto universe. Can't wait for what's to come.
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