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| henred5 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abusepoor Terra, she's never able to tell Locke |
| Cheetah Smith 2002-01-06 ch 1, | abuseheh, rented FFA(Final Fantasy Anthology for PSX) and played FFVI. Terrocke forever! How sweet! Make a sequel! me like! me like! |
| Kat097 2001-10-06 ch 1, | abuseAhhhhhhhhhhh thats so sweet!! even though Celes obviously belongs with Locke! |
| Bard of Today 2001-09-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was kind of cool. And the concept isn't too farfetched either. I like the descriptive detail you put into the motions theye were going through as they were speaking. It's sortof tragic, but the way you put it where she is "content" gives the story a good ending. Nice Job. :) |
| The Jack of Spades 2001-09-13 ch 1, | abuseIt was sweet, but...something is missing from this that I can't put my finger on, something whose lack makes this very empty....maybe you should make it longer, or create an actual situation for them, because the story seems like it's floating in the middle of a void... |