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| Trackstre 2008-06-24 ch 4,  | abuseI really like this story... so far its creative and takes and different direction, focusing on Gaston. The writing and plot so far and believable, however still intriguing. Please continue... I'm very interested to read what develops!! |
| El 2008-03-09 ch 4, anon. | abuseI am really enjoying this story. Please write more. ^^ |
| TrudiRose 2008-02-15 ch 4, | abuseI really liked Sable's moment of compassion for Lefou - poor little guy doesn't get enough of that. Another excellent chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens when Gaston meets her! |
| CartoonJessie 2008-02-15 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter! I think LeFou is really cute in this story too! He's so often totally left out or ridiculised. Good story! |
| CartoonJessie 2008-02-09 ch 3, | abuseGreat story! You write superbly and it's got me hooked! You've got a massive vocabulary (or atleast you use a massive vocabulary in my own eyes, but I'm Dutch so I don't understand everything perfectly yet... Still... This is good for my English!) Anyways, keep up the great work! |
| TrudiRose 2008-02-07 ch 3, | abuseGreat chapter - I'm totally drawn into the story and very intrigued by the way it's unfolding! |
| TrudiRose 2008-01-22 ch 2, | abuseExcellent chapter! You characterized Gaston perfectly, and your descriptions of the town and the countryside are so vivid - everything flows so well. Also, good edit of chapter 1 - it's a lot more clear now! |
| TrudiRose 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseI love your writing style! Your descriptions are amazing - I can really see everything as it happens. It's a very intriguing and original story so far. I'm still wondering what Sable was imprisoned for, but maybe it will be revealed later on. |