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dahan
2008-01-16 . chapter 1
Damn, now you got me hooked...

I actually buy this reasoning for Kav to come back for his second tour so obvious compliments to you for good writing... It actually does make sense that there had to be an outside influence for him to decide to come back.

Oddly enough I actually buy the Chuck influence on Weir that she took him back...

Damn it, now I'm actually hoping you redeem this guy...
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