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| halogurl10 2008-04-26 ch 4,  | abuseyou should do another chapter for the next day telling us exactly why pony ran away why he went to two-bit's. let them have an open an honest discusion with each other. tell each other how each feels the cutis brother with two-bit and steve. pony telling then how he feels. that is my suggestion on how to end it. |
| October Road 2008-03-19 ch 4, | abuseahh, poor pony, it allowed for a cute ending though :) |
| October Road 2008-03-19 ch 3, | abuseenter sodapop! And soon Darry... that's got trouble written on it! (I like darry an awful lot, but he's got the name of ponyboy trouble-maker) |
| October Road 2008-03-19 ch 2, | abuseso far, so good - you've got my interest and I like the way the characters have been written :) |
| OutsidersReviewer 2008-03-12 ch 3, | abuseOkay... Soda should have shown more emotion. Pony ran away for Christ's sake. This doesn't make sense. |
| xemmiex 2008-03-11 ch 4, | abuseYAY! you updated :) i like this chapter i can't wait to read the next one!! |
| Lady Prince 2008-03-10 ch 4, | abuseOk! Great chapter! Get them all together now and have Ponyboy explain why he felt that he had to leave and then give a POV of what everyone thinks about it and let them give their opinions...then have the very end as Ponyboy's POV of what he thinks about what they all say to him. |
| Deanaholic1 2008-03-10 ch 4, | abusewell, awesome chapter, but i need 2 no how soda reacts, like have him be ** at Darry for breaking Pony's nose, then pony having a hard time coming to a good conclusion, tht would lead him to like truouble maker kind of kids or something, sure you'll do great |
| Summer Davis 2008-02-28 ch 3, | abusehey great job update asap i love it! |
| xemmiex 2008-02-24 ch 3, | abuse:O updaTES? |
| ShinigamixGirl 2008-02-22 ch 3, | abuseO_O;; What happens next!? Dx Nu...I wanna know...T_T...^^ Update soon please. :D ~ShinigamixGirl |
| blue moon 2008-02-11 ch 3, | abuseplease write more soon |
| Write-of-Passage 2008-02-08 ch 3, | abuseSo happy I found this story!! Its so good, everyone is in character and its just such a sweet story. LOVE the Pony/TwoBit pairing! And I really look forward to the reunion of Pony and Darry! Thank you for having all my fav pairings in this story! |
| the-bunnys-echo 2008-02-05 ch 3, | abuseI like this story and this chapter. Thanks. |
| Dana Rose 2008-02-04 ch 3, | abuseHaha, that was great! And Tim answering the phone part was hilarious. I can't wait to read more! |