Reviews for Humble Beginnings

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Jarri Scythe 2008-06-20 ch 4,	abuseAw, poor Zack. I love the story though, keep it going XD
G. R. Jensen 2008-05-25 ch 4,	abuseVery nice so far; look forward to more.
Weirdness Rocks 2008-05-17 ch 4,	abuseOkay, I know i said i was going to use the other one, but its not working, ANYWAY. it was excellent, as always. Zach... i think... needs a hug, he might need to be added to my 'To Hug' list. So... just to warn you. im ever so glad hes not going to die.
Just a thought 2008-05-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'm glad you're writing a Zach story like this, however a quick thought. As a current college student, I'd find it much more likely if Zach did college in under 4 years, and maybe started High School a little early. It isn't super hard to graduate College early (if you know what you want to do, but as no child genius I'll be graduating at 19). Just nitpicking though, other than that this was a nice set up
violingrl07 2008-05-14 ch 4,	abuseFine, you have coerced me into giving you a review. I have a soft spot for intelligent social outcasts, so I love your fic. Update soon, please.
beautiful dreamere 2008-05-14 ch 4,	abusepoor baby! hugs zack
saragillie 2008-05-06 ch 3,	abuseGreat idea for a story and it's pretty good so far.
Mary 2008-04-30 ch 3, anon.	abuseawesome fic I love zacky.Keep the chapters coming please
SquintyEye 2008-03-04 ch 3,	abuseI'm enjoying your fic and I can SO see it all happening! I hate when fics are abandoned, too. I'm glad you intend to finish it up. Poor Zack. He's having a rough time of it. :( It makes me sad. Let SOMETHING go his way soon, or I may cry!
holbonesfan 2008-03-03 ch 3,	abuseVery nice. Loving it so far.
mirror-child 2008-03-03 ch 3,	abuseAW! I think I start all my reviews of your Zach-y fic-y with that! Because its freaking SAD! Aww... can I take Zach under my fanfiction wing? Please!!?!? He's just too... not Kenwood-y for Kenwood! I'll introduce him to the people who have 7th period lunch and he can eat lunch with them! Lol. But anyway, good chapter! It was all.. angsty...
leaping.lizards330 2008-03-03 ch 3,	abuseaw Zach's first accounter with a bully! And probably not his last. Ugh I hate how Zach's sibings won't stick up for him! But that's reality. Very good story and I can't wait for more! And I'm so glad you update every once in a while unlike other authors of Zach fics. Darn them! -leapinglizards330 P.S. Few typos that could be fixed...just so you know!
-No Name- 2008-02-17 ch 2, anon.	abusewants to cheer Zack up Ok, so, your writing...is awesome. It catches the social awkwardness, the feeling of people watching you-perfectly. I love it and think you should update soon! Hint-Hint. demands cookie
chaseluv4ever 2008-02-11 ch 2,	abuseNot only one reivew... two reivews to make u extra happy i know that that wuz supposed to be angsty but it wuz like totally funny to read it due to it's reality I mean i can just imagine Zack walking through the halls with his moppy little head of hair... dodging the highschoolers... I wonder what Sarudi would think of him... anyways this was more rantness then reviewness so heres the review really good and well written... goes really deeply into his thoughts : )
chaseluv4ever 2008-02-11 ch 1,	abuseOkie... I know how happy reviews make people... so here's a review ur fic is really good... it's angsty and different which makes me like it let's just say that if this fic is 100% accurate with Zack's childhood it really explains him now!

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