Your author's note is sorta incorrect. The ending was definitely the BEST way possible to end it.

it was good but i think you should of done more chapters comparing all of the rest of the people in your other stories.
by the way i think that you should writes all the stories like the babes of saskue and sakura etc. and by the way you never put shino in any of your storys did he like die before each of your stories start

That was REALLY sad! But such an amazingly written story! Good job on this one too, it was really well written! (I couldn't just say that once!)

This was a really good one-shot, but it made me really sad. That's kinda the point of a tragedy, though, huh? It's sad that Ino got the short end of the stick because I like her A LOT more than Sakura; but, nonetheless, the story was really good and I can't wait for you to continue with your other ones! :)

i still liked the story =]

... wow!
that was amazing!
Truly, outstanding.
you are a great writer, I look forward to reading your work.

Yay, it's a oneshot! And a sad one too! I love those! I hope you do more of them, it's nice to have random little things to read in between the waiting for mroe chapters of stuff. It was really well writen; good contrasting between Ino and Sakura-chan (I can't help adding that to her name; it's so cute when Naruto says it!). And it was really sweet with that thing about the ribbon at the end. So cute imagining little Ino-chan and Sakura-chan! Anyways, hope this isn't going to be the only one, and update your other stories too! Hope to read something new of your's again soon (hint, hint)!
LK

OMG! This one-shot was so powerful, so moving. You could feel Ino crying over Shikamaru's dead body. You could feel Sakura happily talking to her kids. You really out-did yourself with this story!

wow, that was really... it was really different, and it was very good. It kept me reading, after all, and right now I'm sort of hard to impress (moodswings. oh well). Your writing style is engaging and interesting - and, low and behold! You can spell properly! (you'd be surprised about how the people on here cant spell to save themselves T.T)

But you obviously have a lot of talent! I'll follow it :D

Au Revoir!

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and I'm going to sound like a stupid evil ** cow but:

its voila XD

Oh my god, this story is so stunning! I love your writing style. ^.^

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*read all while eating salad* MUNCH MUNCH Oh sorry Maid, just got home from Play auditions and I have to eat my food now so... >.< Pretty cool... *observes* MUNCH MUNCH (Now I feel like a Munchlaces prom Pokemon! lol)

That was odd. Just plain out odd. I could have sworn I didn't blink at all when I was reading it. Why must Shikamaru die? What did he ever do to the anime universe?!? Damn you, evil people!! I liked the descriptions of Sakura in her perfect little 'lala land'. I thought that was hilarious.

you should never ever ever ever EVER delete some of your random little paragraphs. i have a whle folder of them on my computer, and that's how the oneshot i'm about to post came about. it's amazing what little things you can turn into great stories. especially anything written by you. =D

that was so well-written and beautiful and true in the way life is. there are always friends, one who gets all she wants in life, and the other who gets what she needs, but faces the hardships of it all.

"the second" seems like someone that would give birth to twins. yeah, i'm making a happy thought of this. lol