'He responded with a long string of Cybertronian curses before disconnecting the communiqué. I smiled. He was in a really good mood.' One of my favorites this chapter.

Poor Magnus. Though I was laughing quite hard when I read it because the way I read I picture it in my head

'She only seemed to have two moods during that time, deeply, deeply depressed and super fraggin pissed off.' Sounds like a few family
members of mine.

I hate Bay for killing off Jazz and Ironhide. One of the two better be in the fourth movie. I don't care how, they just have to do it.

I've spent two days reading thru to the end and enjoyed the story immensely... There were a few times where I grew worried, especially the story-line about Prowl and was quite happy with the resolution to that. I'm grateful to have found a story that's not a downer! I wish I could be more... I dunno... specific, but I have been reading this in a two-day stint and have only gotten 5 hours sleep in between - which goes to show you I really enjoyed it. I'm off now to pick up the next segment and hopefully won't be up all night too... but... :) Thanks for writing!

Wow... I just finished reading this and I loved it! You had me at the edge of my seat, crying, or grumbling chapter after chapter. I can't wait to start reading the next fic in this story!

when I read the words sibiling rivarly, I though SLAG! the whole base is screwed, sibiling rivarly is the worst! if anone thinks the Cons fight dirty, they have never seen, or bben in, a sibiling fight!

Kacey Kacey Kacey, you are immature sometimes, but thats part of the fun. I was thinking her hangover is going to be very unpleasent

I was very worried for Kacey when I read thios, and somewhat annoyed at Nitro

when I read this, all I could think was get used to it Prime, they do that alot, and holy scrap, I got a lot of reading ahead of me!

cool story

You are so lucky I waited until I read this last chapter before reviewing. I was ready to "rip you a new aft" if you killed Prowl. Okay, fine, I have to be honest. I was more than ready to rip you MULTIPLE new afts just for INSINUATING that Prowl would die.

Good thing he didn't. AND you brought Jazz back. Good for you. I love that little mech. Prowl and Jazz deserve lots of love and happiness.

Honestly, I love your story. If I didn't I wouldn't have such strong reactions. I think I love it more because its not just ONE story. Its a collection of little ones revolving around a central story (Kacey's story) but I love the little ones because they make it all the more believable and real.

I didn't expect to like this character so much given that she has so little screen time. *shrugs* Viper is so cute! I know she's a Decepticon and all but still! I just want to pick her up and play with her!

I'm happy for Mr. Prime (my nickname for him, long story) He deserves all this happiness. Okay so it isn't all happiness and sunshine but then that would be boring, right?

Anyway, now that some of my most favorite Autobots are happily partnered ie Optimus & Ratchet. I hope Prowl and Jazz get more "alone time". I prefer ProwlXOFC and JazzXOFC but what you wrote works so I'll go with it.

Now then...onto BeeXKacey - ness!

this is one of my fave parts! its awsome, yay! go KC*! :)

I LOVE how you're able to make Megatron mean while still making him human without Villian Decaying him! :) That takes major skill! :):):)

Hi I am new here I just gotta review this chapter This story is brilliant for one moment I thought they were gonna lose her and them after a few chapters bring her the usual stuff like optimus. I wonder wat they would react if she died (thinking, imagining ,cries!) WOW that is a scary, sad, tragedy thought! To tell you my honest answer...I like it (Runs away from other reviewers) Likethestorygoodwork (keeps running)