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| JesseMac Girl the Flinda Fr... 2008-10-02 ch 2,  | abuseGay Oz? Is this idea copyrighted? Cuz I think I might be able to pull it off... ...but i dont want 2 plagirize, yknow? **jgirl |
| JesseMac Girl the Flinda Fr... 2008-08-13 ch 3, | abuseok, i'm a little weirded out by the idea i am also cracking up wow |
| JesseMac Girl the Flinda Fr... 2008-08-13 ch 1, | abuseah this seems scary glaran sounds so cute very funny so far :) |
| bec 2008-01-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseUm...sorry, but this is pretty ridiculous. It's just wicked with 'him' replacing every 'her' It could have been really clever and funny...but it's not. It's just lame. |
| Seal Pup 2008-01-18 ch 3, | abuseOkay, interesting concept. However, you need to stop and rethink this whole idea. For example, just changing the gender of the two main characters doesn't exactly cut it. You would also have to change the genders of other charactes as well. Otherwise, it may seem a little weird. Their personalities would also be different. Example: Glinda/Galinda/Galaran Because Glinda, in the musical, is somewhat of a spoiled brat, I would expect the same from her male counterpart. He may be a little girly, but acting exactly like Glinda/Galinda is a little extreme. I will have to agree with previous reviewers: Just changing the she's to he's but keeping everything else the same really isn't a story. Everyone can mentally do that while watching the play on Google or YouTube (and it is there.) Don't think I'm attacking you. It's just that somethings still need some thought as to the execution of the story. |
| Bomba-Fae 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseUsually, male witch's are called warlocks. Not Witch's. Or they're wizards... And if everything exactly the same... The part with "Glinda" coming down from the bubble just seemed weird if she's a he; it doesn't suit at all. Glaran seems way too feminine; if the roles are changed into men, the story is most likely to change along with it... This is just constructive criticism, not a flame. I'm just trying to point out the problems so it'll help you in the future. |
| Zarrian 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseHm... ya know what this reminds me of??!?! ... Guess. No? I'll tell you then! It reminds me of... Wicked! Except with hims. I'm usually very accepting of fics that have good chances and prospects, so I will story alert, as the grammar, descriptions, and possiblities are well with your story. =D |
| Meltalviel 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseWhat was the point of this? o.o The only thing you changed was the names and 'she'/'her' to 'he'/'his'. |