That was awsome

oh your story makes me want to cry! it is so touching!

Very cute. ;)

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that was sweet ^^

Pretty cool

Oh, oh, I'm prepared for stick figures! lol, I like this story. And the girl seems cute. The ending was kinda sad though, but the story itself is still good.

i thought the bingo book was of wanted criminals or missing nin...o well ur stories very sad...but at least he keeps cherry blossoms on him.

I love how you made Ameko's mother talk! It made her really sound like a mother talking to a small child. I also like your disclaimer... If you are to own Naruto one day, then I AM PREPARED FOR STICK FIGURES!! Cute story, anyways.

Sad, but really well written. The little girl definetely seems very cute, and her mum seems sweet. It's a very tragic tale though.

I LOVED IT it was so cute. And quite sad lol "THE END!" "No,no mommy's not finished yet >.

That was adorable.

I feel bad for the little girl though. She thought the story was going to have a happy ending. But personally, I like it like this.