This is really good. And he is definetly someone you do not want in your dreams. I once had a dream where I was mocked, via text message, for liking all of the main characters from the Dark Tower. Roland, Oy, Jake, and it was from Walter/Marten. That was not fun, and made me feel sad. If this was a real dream, that sucks, but nice job transcribing it. If not, this is really good anyways.

Absolutely wonderful. Stream of Conciousness works wonderfully here, and absolute, unending darkness is a fear of mine. It made me completely uncomfortable (especially the broken leg part - I've felt broken bones riding on each other and its a horrible feeling) and worked very well. *favorites*