Hm...Is it finally over ?

He's really a stalker, huh? =D

i wasn't going to review this, because the ending made me just as angry as the ending of the book itself! ah well. the rest was delightful, and it really would just make my year if you expanded on it, or maybe made a sequel to tell more of this story, i am simply fascinated by the ides you presented here, and yelled aloud in anguish when i saw that it ended with no resolution!

It was VERY good though.

Very nicely done, I like how you put this one in the future to add to the affect of Aly's time being the same as Selendrile's. I like it a lot, I hope you do more in the future.

^_^ Close enough to a happy ending for me.