Awesome story! It's been awhile since I've found any that I've liked enough to stick with all the way through, but I finally did!
I really liked all the mystery throughout about Trinity and her past, and honestly, after reading the chapter in which you described all the aunts, I thought Dezaria was going to be the main focus of the story.
There were a few things, like grammar and spelling mistakes, but they weren't too bad where they really detracted from the story. The descriptiveness was great and the love story aspect of it was really well done.
Now I'll go find the sequel!

This is amazing. I'm so glad I found this. It is extremely well written and I cannot wait to read more!

that. was. awesome.
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Its been long since I was to enrupted by a story here on fanfiction. Beautifully written it drew me in and here I sit in the middle of the night with a test awaiting me tomorrow. Three hours I have until school but I do not regret. I wish to hear more from you in the future, if you have not already written more stories.

Yours sincerely,

Undead Artist

This story is so cool. I loved it, Great work!

The prologue of this story is really brilliant, but this chapter let me down a bit. I’m incredibly wary of all the unusual names, and can’t make much sense of what is going on. A beta reader might be a huge help with the grammar, and possibly lead you in the right direction. Trinity is oddly similar to a character of mine (same name and similar personality) from a Lord of the Rings story I had posted on another account. Now, don’t get me wrong, I’m not accusing you of theft. I just felt like pointing out that her attitude is a little overdone.

I plan to continue reading this story, and hope to grow attached to it.

>.< Hm, I'm not sure how I feel about the "religious nutcase" thing. It's vaguely insulting, as I happen to be a Christian, myself. Oh well. It's only a fanfic I suppose.

O.O The poor girl is psychotic.

O.O It's great...but you need to work on paragraphs and punctuation.

Whoop! That was great! I'm almost sad to see it finished.lol. Thanks for the email you sent earlier. Made me smile. I was going to leave a couple of other reviews for a few other chapters but the PC was playing up and wouldn't let me. Damn the piece of junk.lol
Loved the twists you put in there and the almost romance-less way Trinity and Legolas get together. Fantastic! Sap-free romance! Gotta love it. Although I still don't quite get where she even came from in the first place. But that's neither here nor there.Lol.
Oh! Just read the last line in the last chap and there's a sequel! Sorry, can't write anymore. Gotta read! Bye.
xx

Oh! Gotta love a good twist! And you led up to it so well! Right, on to the next chapter. Can't wait! :)

The moment you put in there when she picked up the ring was fantastic. And I love that Aragorn and Gandalf still aren't 100% sure about her. In most fics (including mine) they're the first ones to go. I say again, well done for the originality.

I love that Trinity isn't 'nice'. She's antisocial and bitter, a refreshing change.lol. It's taken me a while to read this far (i have the attention span of an intoxicated flea sometimes) but I'm glad i've kept at it. it's an interesting concept you've got so far and i'm looking forward to seeing where you're going with it.

Blimey! The first paragraph and she's dead already? That doesn't bode well.Lol. Very well written though. You can really feel Legolas' pain. Love it.

HOLY CRIPES!!

In word... WOW.

I'd grown bored with LOTR's fanfic and it's been awhile since I've read any and so I decided to check it out and I find your story.

*settles in chair for the long haul and continues reading*