LOL. "What a slimey little man. I'm wondering if I should just cut it off, hmm?" Tifa smiled sadistically. That line had me practically in hysterics. Tifa can certainly be evil when she wants to! I also enjoyed the scene where Tifa and Vincent meet up with Aerith and Cloud- poor guy, forced to wear a dress. I also like how Vincent apraises Aerith- he obviously recognizes her worth. :)

hey it me again. I loved the way you tied in elements of the orginal game and at the same time have it AU. Cloud is well writen and the idea of him knowing he isn't Zack is an intersting on.. maybe overtime he will lose his sense of self and blend his and Zacks personals? Can't wait to find out.
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Cloud has a gun! So weird it is to have him without his sword! I absolutely love how you write Cloud's reactions to Aerith- it gives me warm fuzzies :P Particularly liked his reaction to her saying she'd repay him with a date! Woo hoo!

Woot for a new chapter! You did a better job of clearing up Cloud's mission of what he was trying to accomplish. Again, I love the flashing back to the original game conversation. And I love the Turks new look. :D Great work, as usual.

Eew, rats! *cringes* I hate those little beasties! *clears throat* Another very intense chapter. For being the complicated, difficult character that she is, I feel you capture Tifa quite well. I was rather amused by Vincent not wanting to meet the same fate as the drunks. XD

I loved this story. For some reason I found myself reading it out loud which is a rare thing from me. Great job. Love the way you word Vincent thoughts the narritve is refreshing and addicting I can't wait to find out whats happening. It is just like watching a good black and white detective movie.

Ooh, cliffhanger! *shakes fist* But again, love it. I particularly enjoyed the part where Tifa slugged her pervert customer. ^_^ Very intriging! And Vincent's shooting scene was very well done- I like the way you write such scenes. Keep it up! Or I shall steal the pizza from you!

Yes, poor Vincent should have asked for more money. ^_^ You already know I love it so far. Dark brooding Vincent as an investigator. . . Very awesome!