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NarUt0'z Wiif3Y 2008-07-21 ch 8,	abuseOhh what's gonna happen now? This is so full of suspense. lol
NarUt0'z Wiif3Y 2008-07-21 ch 7,	abuseOkay That was cool, though i feel confused about that last part...Oh well, Next chap will give the charm.
NarUt0'z Wiif3Y 2008-07-20 ch 6,	abuseI really like those italicized little dialogues in the very beginning, they're funny awkward. lolz and um, i like the story. I really can't stop reading it. You, my friend, are great.
NarUt0'z Wiif3Y 2008-07-20 ch 3,	abuseIf it wasn't for that glossary, i'd be so lost. LOlz Oh yeah, she stroke back.
NarUt0'z Wiif3Y 2008-07-20 ch 2,	abuseNice. This is a challenging story to read,it's not obvious and it makes you think. BTW, your author's note thingy at the end was funny.
NarUt0'z Wiif3Y 2008-07-19 ch 1,	abuseyeah, you're right. I am confused, but i definitely like this. :D
sasudia 2008-07-14 ch 9,	abusei read and reviewed this already but. then i read tithe. by holly black. and its better. did you get some of this from that? m. good story though. =)
Anime Tenshi 892 2008-07-13 ch 10,	abuseWow! That was amazing!! It was some of the best fantasy I’ve ever read! And I only read fantasy books so I hope I have some idea of what I’m talking about. I personally think you should try and get this work published. For real. It was a little hard for me to understand at the beginning but I think I managed to catch the rhythm of the story by the time I got to the 2nd chapter. It’s an amazing concept for a story and I seriously think you should like work on it a little more in terms of adding a little more detail and making a bit longer and then try and get it published. Maybe you should change the names as well(if you do publish it) but whatever. I was disappointed that it was so short cuz I was really enjoying reading it. Unfortunately I’m not much of an author myself because I don’t have the courage to put up anything that I’ve written. No one reads my work. Well except when my mom found my stories and e-mailed them to my entire family!! She’s so nosey. Well anyway your story is amazing and I really enjoy your writing style. I truly believe u have the skill and imagination to become a published author, and a very popular one at that.- unless you’re already a published author in which case I would like the names of the books u have written. I’ve never actually written a review before so I’m not sure what it entails but I hope my poor attempt was alright. You see I’m one of those horrible people who reads hundreds of fanfictions but never reviews because I’m not sure what to say or I’m just to lazy to try and compose a decent review. I felt however that I had to tell you how much I enjoyed your work despite how horrible and inexperienced I am when it comes to reviewing.
Un!sawr 2008-06-14 ch 10, anon.	abuseI can't believe I have to type this all over again because my son-of-an internet-connection, or more like lack of Dx But it's worth it I guess. Well let's see if I can remember what I wanted to tell you, ahem -- That was just ... beautiful,dark, twisted, intense, original, brilliant even, and the list can go on forever. I have never read anything like it; the details & descriptions are disgustingly amazing and mind-blowing, literally. If it's possible, you can see my brains blown to bits. You have this unique way of writing that can almost be called as your signature as a writer. The quotes are still stuck in my head, and forever will be. Not as much fluff as I would've liked (which is quite understandable), but all the other stuff made up for that department. And the confusing terms made it even better 8D I only wished you could've carried it out longer, even if it was for just a 'tad bit, but your inspiration has made it this far, and that is good enough for me. I look forward to your future babies--I mean creations.
inustorm 2008-06-13 ch 4,	abuseok i just wanna know if you came up with the plot on your own, as in everything about the fairies and stuff cuz its brilliant!! Is it your own idea? Or something you found somewhere and are using it in Sasu Saku POV? XD Doesn't matter its awesome! :) Nice work!! :)
sasudia 2008-06-08 ch 10,	abuseWHERE IS THE SEX?!?!! haha just kidding. but this was really well written. reminds me of the book wicked lovely. i dunno if youve read it. =)
Chibi Strawberry Neko 2008-05-11 ch 10,	abuseI am beyond confused @-@"
XxriotxX 2008-05-11 ch 10,	abusethat was an awesome story!
AGENT KUMA-CHAN 2008-05-11 ch 10,	abuseIt ENDED? AND I MISSED THAT? NOESS! ... U.U Yeah, this really could be stretched out a bit. It's confusing-ish, with questions that are left to be answered and maybe needs a little more developed. .. but other than that? I loved the descriptions, the idea of it all. THE WHOLE THING WAS COOL. The first few chapters were nicely developed. (though, you could tell after chapter six that the whole thing was rushing together...) ...A few questions, though: 1) WHY THE HECK WAS THE KING SO DARN FIXED ON GETTING THE QUEEN TO LOVE HIM? Destroying the earth JUST TO GET THAT DONE? AND DID ALL THE FAIRIES KNOW/AGREE WITH THAT? AND WHY DID SHE ALLOW THIS IN THE FIRST PLACE? AND HOW THE HECK DID THEY JUST DIE? ...And the ending...le sigh Does that mean they live seperate lives now and the fairies are not going to take over the world? (The poor Faeries, though..THEY NEED THE ENERGY.) ...feels incomplete I need choclate...
sunlite-fangirls-4life 2008-05-10 ch 10,	abuseI know I usually lurk, but I felt like I HAD to review for once. I-I-I-I LOVED THIS! Sure it was an itty bitty confusing sometimes, but that was only because I had to go look up some of the terms you were using. There was so much pretty imagery, and the ending was amazing, even though Sasuke and Sakura aren't together. Mami had said to never trust the fairies, and Sakura had listened. She hadn’t. She looked on them as aliens, monsters, hated them for having failed her again and again and laughing while she struggled to survive. They were a thing so terrible and fierce, that she forgot to see the rose beyond its net of thorns. But no more. No more glitter glam glossed fairytales. Sasuke had promised and— She trusted him. She did. For a moment, she wanted to run and throw herself into the earth, to let him catch her. ~ She scrubbed the back of her hands across her eyes, and turned her back on a world of savage beauty. She would not desire her nightmares. Let Sasuke rule the fairies, she had a cheap kingdom of fake plastic and glass jewels to live for. Sakura pushed photographic sunset hair back behind her ears, and forced herself to smile. . . . (her eyes burned as she wept the magic from them.) ~ That bit right there equals a complete win. I think that just might have been my favourite set of lines in this whole fic. It was a nice twist to the term "fairytale", because as we all know reality is far from that picture perfect world. Seriously. You are such an amazing writer.

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