Woah. Wasn't expecting that, although I started getting suspicious when Sheppard manhandled the guy so easily. Damn. That sent shivers down my spine, but it was still fricken awesome. Maybe because of that. Either way, props!

Ew~~ This is the kind of little one shot that wants to make one weep at its one shot nature. =( So evil.

Oh, wow. THAT was amazing! Did NOT see it coming!

Holy smokes! Now that was unexpected! Is there a part 2? Please let there be a part 2! I would like to find out more about the experiment that went wrong... Great story!

Holy Hannah. This was very well written.

Holy Crap! I'm awake *now*!! You do realize that you'll be buried with requests for more, don't you?! :)

NICE! any chance of a continuation?

oh... that was... oh my... not what i expected and i still missed it till the last bit... i'd say the experiment went wrong...

nicely done.

Read this before and it's still a shocker!

Oh my, I didn't see that one coming; rodney a wraith!
terrible experiment indeed. yikes.

Whoa. So totally didn't see that coming. Well done.