 RaeTheRandom 2009-08-08 . chapter 14I totally just discovered this story and I must say, It's SPECTACULAR! One of my ABSOLUTE favorites. I don't seem to have the capability to stop reading it.
And I must say, I laughed quite a bit at the place in this chapter where DG was telling Scraps a story and it was an episode of Firefly. A good episode too.
Excellent job at writing this!
♪Rae♪ |
 MASTERGAMERSEMPAI 2009-06-30 . chapter 26Wow...that was an adrupt ending. Oh well. I loved that story. You have an interesting mind my dear friend. |
 Hakusho009 2008-11-02 . chapter 14Ha! I love the Firefly reference in this chapter! Firefly is a fabulous show.
I really like this fanfic. Haven't said anything up to now, sorry. Still, I like how you created Scraps in this new universe. And I LOVE how you made her crazy-ramblings actually poetic and sensical rather than stereotypicsl "oh the monsters and spiders! I'm uber nuts! Love me, Glitch!" You really are developing her character well. Keep it up! I enjoy reading this. |
 nadeshiko1 2008-09-16 . chapter 26Glad to see that the gang decided to stay in the village for a while and rest up. I doubt the trip would've been comfortable if they had left immediately.
DG's to-do-list is cute. Gives her something to do instead of complaining about the bad conditions in the village.
Wyatt Cain gone soft? OMG!
I like how Glitch and Scraps have gotten more comfortable with each other to be playful. I giggled when Scraps said that other people "overly tall". That is so true for those of described as petite.
Aw! Nice to see Jeb and Az being more open about their relationship in front of family and friends. I certainly hope that they get their HEA! |
 nadeshiko1 2008-09-16 . chapter 25Wyatt is so stubborn somtimes it's just unreal! I know that he feels as if he has to take care of everybody, but why can't he just let someone else take care of him for a change!
Glad to see DG and Jeb combining forces to get him to at least take something for the pain, even if it does make him loopy.
I'm glad that Scraps seems to be able to remember more and more. And Glitch is so giving away his feelings for her. It's just so cute!
It's a little sad to see DG so calm and collected about all the pain and brutality over the past couple of days, even annuals. Or maybe she's just getting better at hiding it and dealing with it in private.
The healer just cracks me up! From her language to her suggestions she is just overall funny!
Off to read the last chapter! Whoot-whoot! |
 nadeshiko1 2008-09-16 . chapter 24Scraps and Glitch are so friggin' cute! I just LOVE them!
I just loved how Glitch was having an argument with Ambrose while he was kissing Scraps. Makes me laugh. He!
When you described Scraps in the rain, I could almost picture it and she looked so pretty.
I'm glad that Scraps doesn't feel overly conflicted by who she is now with Molly and others inside her head. Hopefully, with Glitch's help, she'll be able to sort it all out.
Off to read more! |
 nadeshiko1 2008-09-16 . chapter 23Glad to see that for the most part, everyone's okay. With Scraps' past faced, I'm wondering if she'll ever dwell on who she was before everything that happened to her took place?
Glad to see that Glitch and DG got all the artifacts that they wanted. He.
I LOVE the Ozian plastic explosives! When i read it, I just ended up in a fit of giggles!
Man, that was some explosion to be felt all the way through the magical doorway. I'm just glad that the cave didn't collapse.
Off to read more! |
 lady of the realm 2008-09-15 . chapter 26Thank you so much for sharing Scraps and your talents with the Tin Man universe. Action, drama, suspense, romance, you can write it all. And you created an original character that really tugged at my heart. Despite her cosmetic flaws, Scraps is, in a way, the type of person that many of us wish we were -- honest, loyal, brave, charming, funny and someone who is loved and respected by good people. |
 KateCayce 2008-09-15 . chapter 26Yay! Great story - looking forward to the future stories! |
 Cascade Waters 2008-09-15 . chapter 26I just found this fic last night, and I love it!! I love Scraps, and you write her so well.
If I could just put forth one request, just for your consideration: I'm hunting for some father/son stuff. I'd love for you to be inspired to fold in some 'learning' for them... ;)
fc (If you're not inspired, please don't worry about it--I'm just weird, is all.) |
 KLCtheBookWorm 2008-09-15 . chapter 26“I don’t want to hear it.” DG held up her hand.
“Neither do I, which is why I’d like some nice thick stone walls separating us all at night.” --howling reaction. That was too perfect.
And yes, please for the one-shots. I know I can't get enough of Scraps and Glitch. Seeing Jeb and Az won't be too bad either. |
 vamp1987 2008-09-15 . chapter 26I like how you transitioned this in preparation for the one shots you mentioned. It's nice to see that Scraps is finally making sense. She will have episodes like Glitch but they both seem to be doing better now that they have found each other. Two halfs made whole. The story was trully entertaining. I really enjoyed it. |
 Hidden Relevance 2008-09-15 . chapter 26All together now- AW!
Great way to end this! And I definitely look forward to the glimpse of Jeb and Az's relationship too. Just a fun tale all around! |
 Hidden Relevance 2008-09-15 . chapter 25Oh man.. the dirty little healer has me cracking up! I love it! |
 KLCtheBookWorm 2008-09-14 . chapter 25This chapter is great. From Adora drugging Cain's coffee, to the Healer prescribing sex. LOL Poor Jeb. |