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Reviews for: GILD: Fool in love working title
Fyrekiss
2008-01-16 . chapter 1
This was really good i like the way it captured me i couldn't stop till i was finished. That's right all that glitters is not gold he left her for a younger woman now if only all those stupid teen girls would stop running after those older guys and focus on their education.

Thanks for this i really liked the way he just gave her the bouquet then walked away.
LadyBastet92
2008-01-16 . chapter 1
Very good job, and original plotline! You could have closed the story up a bit better, but it's an interesting storyline about the JoeyxMai couple not working out.
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