That was a very sad but well-written story. I was wondering how long a happy ending can last...

WOW. That was dark and bleak. I loved it!

Really enjoyed this fic - it has the dreamy feel of an unfulfilled fairytale.

Well after they left Kinkan you'd think all would be well, it's sad that everyone passed away and Mytho was eventually left all alone. It seems Drosselmeyer got the tragedy he wanted in the end.

Beautifully written. It brought tears to my eyes.

No one ever really considers what might happen within Mythos' thoughts, do they? What might happen after the story ends. You did this, however, and it was beautiful and incredibly depressing all at the same time. I commend you for it.

Ah, indeed. Depressing, but very well written. The passing of the seasons and Mytho's feelings as everything happened around him was indeed interesting.

I'm not completely sure what I think of this. It's well written, but kind of depressing.

This is quite lonely, and beautiful, rather like Mytho himself. It's an interesting concept, arguing which part of the story is the worst, whether it be the beginning or the end or any point in between. For someone as timeless as Mytho, an end would mean nothing if the characters lived on, forced to live with the consequences of their ending while everything else precious faded away. A lonely existence for a tragic character who never really chose any of this.

Great job!

Deary me this is good.