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| RubiesxEmeralds 2008-04-29 ch 1,  | abuseUm I know we're supposed to be encouraging, so I guess it's alright. One main thing you should pay attention to though is explaining what you're writing clearly. Also, getting the help from a beta wouldn't hurt either. |
| Strekoza 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abuseCan't say you wrote much so comment on your writting, like the angle though - rather than all what if this or that you have something else a continuation with a bit imagination; don't make it too overromantic though. Well done and keep up the good work. |
| kiley 2008-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abusegood start so far it's pretty good! ha i am sitten next 2 ya. |
| laxypaxy101 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseAH! Shield my eyes from this AWFUL story! Don't quit your day job honey cuz this SUX! DELETE IT! U CAN'T WRITE! Screw u! |
| cutie pie baby cakes 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseawsome! keep going. it sounds really good |
| Luvinbeinsweet94 2008-01-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey thats reli good! you didnt write a whole lot but so far its great hope you write more! |
| jj13 2008-01-17 ch 1, anon. | abusehey i like this story even though i never read the book please update |
| jelly 2008-01-17 ch 1, anon. | abusehey this is an awesome story i can barely wait until the next update i love this story! |
| bloo ducki 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abusenice keep going |