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Essteka 8/14/09 . chapter 7That was a pretty good chapter, Phillip Clark! Aang is an interesting choice as Genie. I like the fact he was trapped in the lamp for a hundred years instead of ten thousand years, just like when he was trapped in a iceberg on his show. The way Aang played Genie was a bit different than what Genie would have done and I liked it. Judging by the lyrics, I have the feeling you're gonna use the Foot Soldiers as the Forty Thieves (and possibly Shredder as Sa'luk) in your King of Thieves remake. But that's just an observation. I also liked it when Aang pulled a Buneary from the magician hat instead of a rabbit. That was fitting. As for Alyssa, she seems good as the Avatar Genie-in-training. Time to read the next chapter! |
Anonymous But Interested 8/13/09 . chapter 12 Hey there. Thanks for getting the third-to-last chapter up AND for liking another one of my ideas enough to use them here. Both are greatly appreciated. Once again, great job on the action, exchanges, emotional content and climax set-up in all the right places. I'll definitely be looking forward to the next chapter as soon as time and inspiration will allow. |
Dr. Blowhole's Princess 8/13/09 . chapter 12Yikes! That's bad! Onto the final battle! Also, I was kinda hoping that when Shego wished to be sorceress, she'd say "with her powers" and then Aang would have my powers drained into her and then I'd end up at the ends of the earth with Rose and the others. Then in the next chapter, before the battle, Rose would find me freezing and blue and Rose would say "What happened to you?" then Pterano would say "You see, Alyssa happens to have the power of fire, so without it, she'll probably freeze forever" What do you think? |
nobodiez 8/13/09 . chapter 12 holy cow, shego has the lamp is all powerful, and sent rose far,far away, can rose still save the day? so here some suggestion if you like to use them and if you don't that ok, so near the end delete try to help rose,because he feel bad, and want to be good. when delete try help her. shego turn him into a rusty bucket. and when shego and buzz are sucked into the lamp. delete turn back to normal, and join rose and hsi friends. PS. are you planning a prince of egypt fanmake? |
Essteka 8/11/09 . chapter 6Again, it was a pretty good chapter! And yes, I didn't expect to see a LBT character as Carpet. It's been a while since I watched a LBT movie. I think the latest one I saw was the ninth one titled "Journey to the Big Water". Anyway, Pterano is a pretty good choice as Carpet. Shego's disguise as Bellatrix was good. I liked the part where Roxas destroyed the lock with his Keyblades instead of Momo. That was a nice part. I'm gonna stop here. I'll read and review all the other chapters in the next few days. But so far, it's a pretty good fanmake! |
Essteka 8/11/09 . chapter 5This was a good chapter. All the characters were used very well. The lines were excellent, especially Roxas' line “First sign of love: speaking in synchronization,”. I have nothing else to say besides that it was good. Okay, one more thing: Jake seemed a bit feminime, but not that much actually. I don't think it was a major problem here. Time to read the next chapter! |
Essteka 8/11/09 . chapter 4That wasn't a bad chapter at all! Once again, the cameos were good. Especially Daffy's cameo, which was hilarious. CatDog's appearance was pretty good too. Clever choice with Johnny Storm as the Fire Eater. Grievous as the Merchant was also nice. LOL with Chewbacca! Time to read the next chapter! |
Essteka 8/11/09 . chapter 3Not a bad chapter here either. I liked your choice as the Sultan. SpongeBob fits very well. Very good job with the references to his own show. Hmm... A half-dragon boy who owns a dragon as his pet... quite ironic. Personally, I think you did a good job with not making Jake seem too feminine. That was quite good. Time to read the next chapter! |
Essteka 8/11/09 . chapter 2Well, I have to admit it's a pretty good chapter here. Momo as Abu is a perfect choice. The Toon Patrol as the guards is quite fitting too. I enjoyed the cameos, such as the Peanuts characters, Kenny, Jack Sparrow and the DP characters. Nice choice with Ino as the Prince Achmed. I also liked the reference to BTTF here. Time to read the next chapter! |
dinobot 8/11/09 . chapter 11 well i was right, but you do have a But Interested, i'm sorry for rubbing it your one more question, are you planning a prince of egypt fanmake |
nobodiez 8/11/09 . chapter 11 nice work, but look like rose trouble are from over, sponge bob want to make her a queen. and worse shego know the truth. |
Essteka 8/11/09 . chapter 1Okay. I said I didn't want to read that fanmake, but after reading what you have done with your Princess Bride fanmake and your MK vs. DCU fanmake, I decided to give it a try and to read your Aladdin fanmake. Anyway, interesting casting you have here. Shego as Jafar... She always have been more competent than Drakken, so that's a nice choice. I don't watch Cyberchase since it doesn't even air here in Quebec, but I've read some fanfics by JusSonic featuring some of these characters and Buzz and Delete seem to fit as Iago. Good choice with Johnny Rancid as Gazeem. Nice cameos with Sakura and Hinata. Time to read the next chapter! |
Anonymous But Interested 8/11/09 . chapter 11 Hey there. Thanks greatly for getting the next chapter to this piece up AND for liking a few more of my ideas enough to use them. Both are greatly appreciated. As usual, great job on the action, exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. No further suggestions at present, but I'll keep thinking and I'll definitely be looking forward to tne next chapter (aka the third-to-last) as soon as time and inspiration will allow. |
Dr. Blowhole's Princess 8/11/09 . chapter 11Uh-oh, this doesn't look good. Keep going, Phil. |
anonymous 8/1/09 . chapter 10 quick question, will you do a sub space emissary story by any chance? |