that was a good but sad story.

Oh My god, that is so sad. Sad and bittersweet; at least she can rest in peace now.

Good story. Poor Serenity. She is free now though.

This story is so sad but so beautiful and I absolutely love it. Although I must say you do have a lot of run-ons, try to work on that. All in all the story is amazing and I look forward to seeing more from you.