 Riffer Kyle 2009-10-03 . chapter 11Updates please? Oh Please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please! |
 bydneley 2009-09-20 . chapter 11oh i really really had fun reading your fanfic so i pray and hope that you'd be able to continue this in time hehehe. More power to your writing and to your study as well. ^_^ |
 bydneley 2009-09-20 . chapter 7haha i enjoyed this chapter so much, so wacky and they almost kissed if only they weren't interrupted haha. ^_^ |
 bydneley 2009-09-20 . chapter 3poor ryoga i feel for him in this chapter. ^_^ |
 Flames Chaos and Wolf 2009-09-17 . chapter 11This is a great story! I want more! |
 chibi-prince 2009-08-21 . chapter 11great story! i love it! plz continue :) |
 Dextrose 2009-08-12 . chapter 11Just finished reading chapters 1 -11 in one sitting. I enjoyed all of it! Hope the next one comes soon.
I guess my only gripe (not just yours but many fanfics) is when characters are sitting in a rapid fire conversation, sometimes I get confused and have to re-read to figure out who's saying what. Example would be when Ryoga and Ranma are talking in front of the campfire. Just a little food for thought. |
 Jinnai 2009-08-10 . chapter 11A rather nice story so far - especially in that, rather than introducing new twists or plot conventions (no matter how nermian such would be), it eliminates a few. I await the next chapter. |
 justsukiya 2009-07-13 . chapter 11amazing chapter!! I love the description of the character's feelings!! They are so cute with these little advances in their relationship~
aw I love your Ranma here. That conversation was great and very realistic. That last sentence is So funny!! Yuup good thing for Ryoga that HE didn't pick Ukyo! hahaha great job!! |
 Ace 2009-06-27 . chapter 11 AW I love the end! Yay!! Ranma and Ryoga actually being buddies lol oh man! I really love your fanfic!! Please continue! Aww I love a jealous Ryoga! Please continue to update when possible!! ^_^ |
 FantomoDrako 2009-06-25 . chapter 11Woo, another chapter!
It was great! I really like the way you're developing the relationships. You're doing an excellent job!
Another awesome chapter; can't wait for the next!
Keep up the great work!
~Fantomo |
 count-zechs00 2009-06-23 . chapter 11I'm so glad to see a new chapter! I really liked seeing Ryoga's thoughts on everything. |
 ranma36 2009-06-22 . chapter 11Sorry if I have not reviewed the story sooner but I have been reading since chapter 1 and I think you are doing a fantastic job! keep up the good work! |
 XxkanaxX 2009-06-21 . chapter 1I'll surely print all of this out when you're done with this fanfiction! ^^, I love Ryouga Ukyou pairing XD thank you for such a wonderful read :D |
 Baitdcat 2009-06-20 . chapter 11Wow! It's always good to see new chapters from you. And I love this piece of insight from Ryouga. I can't wait to read more from you! Thanks for the delightful read ;). |