This story was very enjoyable to view. Everyone seemed quite in-character, and the drama level was just right. It was interesting to see your theories for the Storm Hawks' origins. This was all so amusing to read. Though humour was not a genre, this story was incredibly comical.

You know, for some reason, I sort of had the feeling that Finn would make a PiperxAerrow reference, what with how heated some parts were. It was nice how you didn't let them linger over that comment for too long, however, merely blushing quickly and moving on.

Overall, this story was extremely entertaining, and I find I should look over your other literary pieces. Magnificent work!

man u and ambrel are my fav authors on this whole sit i love ur work and i know im reading this stork all super late because i was reading ur other story about all them in the future and i simply love that one so much i instintly faved that one too and when aerrow brings this thing up in the story ha i like how u conected the two i cant waight for the 6th ch. it is just so awsome my fav ch. is 2 i love stork and piper parings and u made it so good and real and i really went with the flow with this story even the part about aerrow being to perfect too its just wow i love ur work :)

aw thats so sad poor finn i really feel sorry for him and piper too but it was still good and no :( only onee more chapter left

OMG STORK IS SO AWESOME ! XD and unlike some people on this site u make him sound good and not super pestamistic and evil and u show that he really does care about everyone he just wont show it and i love u for that :) next chapter Whoo who!

omg this one was so good i loved it even more and all of them playing exspecially piper and junko was so cute i love how there bonding and everything :) oh and when finn started talking about stork being a player LMFAO ! :D oh man i just loved that this story is now an instint fav ;)

this chapter was really good and that whole stork caring about them part that was just so awesome i loved it :)

In my opinion, this is one of the best 'Storm Hawks' fanfic out there - bravo!

this fan fic was one of the first completed fic's that i read in the SH section and it is also one of my faverites, the characterisation was okay and the storyline was simple yet engaging, thanks very much for good read.

"an then tehy all diyed an piper went emo an cut herself an killd herslef a week l8r"

LMAO. Oh dear, that was pure win. And not just for that, but for the entire story. It was well constructed and you've got characterization down pat, not to mention the backstories you've added. Just wonderful.

Cheesy endings are usually the best, dear.
I think its good to see a story that has no romance in it, for once. Don't get me wrong, I'm a shipper at heart, but it just felt good to see them all get closer, but not THAT close.
Everyones pasts were tragic, and made me feel real sympathy with all of the characters. It was a wonderful read, and I really enjoyed it!
X3

Okay, I loved this story. It was so awesome, finding out everyone's backgrounds with little bits of action and humor in between. Also, I personally think that Aerrow's mom was a Storm Hawk, and this is the first fic I've read that agrees with that. Say, do you like crossovers? If you do, I've got a really good Storm Hawks-Legend of Zelda crossover going on. It's called The Hylian League. Could you please take a look?

Hehe. Nah, I liked the ending- it wasn't that cheesy at all.
A really great story overall: kudos!

Good ending. Your version of Aerrow's past looks a lot like what I imagined.

This was something resembling amazing. I loved the simple but in-depth characterizations, I loved the premise, I loved the natural interaction between the characters. It was like having a hidden video camera on the Condor, showing us the moments that the shoe DOESN'T let us see.

And I'm almost sad its over. But I know what you mean when you say its like a marathon when you finish a multichapter; crossing the ribbon line is wonderfully fulfilling.

I'll miss the updates, thats for sure. :)

OMG! This is just... PERFECT! So in-character, so funny, so sad. This could seriously happen on the show. It's that good.