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Jessi 2008-11-18 . chapter 9
I love that chapter. Nice how you fit the flashback in there.
Silverstormshadow 2008-11-15 . chapter 9
oh wow! i would have reviwed every chappie but i figured i just review once i read what you'd got

i love the way you've drawn out ty and amy's relationship
that its drawn out but always on the surface of everything they do
and that they are taking time to know themselves b4 they no each other.
i HATED that they broke up t the end of the series it was totaly shocking LOL!
rezmutt 2008-11-14 . chapter 9
i love the characters they are true to their book selves but r also different so it is a completely different and unique story u write very well although sometimes u miss a word here and there
rainpaint 2008-09-17 . chapter 9
I am now grinning stupidly and must stop before someone asks me why...

“I’m meeting my girlfriend..." YAY! Sam has a girlfriend! Bless you. I can't tell you how relieved I was to read that line...although I really did like Sam, even from my first impression of him. He didn't seem at all like Will, from what I remember, or like Alfredo, from how you've described ol' "charming" Pasta-Man. Yeah, I really do like him, even if I'm not quite sure what's wrong with Cappa yet. I have a theory, but I'll have to wait and see...

I can really, really understand where Amy's coming from as she's talking to Ty on the phone. Sometimes it's really just easier to stay away and just be on your own - but really, it's not the best thing.
Strizzy 2008-07-05 . chapter 8
I'm enjoying reading this! I hope there's more to come soon!
SinkingFurtherUnderAllTheTimeX 2008-06-03 . chapter 8
i love it!! poor ty!! please let them realize their feelings soon!! great writing!
ffgirlmoonie 2008-05-17 . chapter 8
Jack knows wut he's talking about, lol
rainpaint 2008-05-17 . chapter 8
Again, loved it! It drew me in as much as when I read it the first time.

*repeats all the praise I said in my beta-ing*

I'm very intrigued to see what will happen with Sara - I like her a lot. And with this Sam...person...*grumbles*

I trust you way more than I trust Lauren Brooke, but this had better turn out all right! LOL.
horses4ever 2008-05-17 . chapter 8
That was an awesome chapter, I loved it. And I know that this seems minor but thank you for breaking up Amy and Alfredo, I hate this couple as much as Amy and Will. Ugh. Anyways great chapter. UD soon
spazzysassyangel 2008-04-03 . chapter 7
loved it update soon
horses4ever 2008-04-03 . chapter 7
Wow. Really good story. UD soon.
rainpaint 2008-04-03 . chapter 7
That was fantastic - well worth the wait! You did such an amazing job capturing the mixed emotions of the day. I love the hints of future Amy-Ty-ness to come, without going overboard.

"These were the thoughts that had been stalking her for the last few days."

Awesome line! I love the imagery. I may have to borrow that sometime.

Anyway, take as much time as you need writing the next chapter. This one was worth waiting for, and I'm sure the next one will be as well.

Favorite part - the restaurant. The mental picture of tiny Amy dancing around in a pink dress was priceless. And of course the very end.
Literacy Actress 2008-03-08 . chapter 6
I NEED TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO AMY AND TY!
I love your suspence that you created so far -- what will happen on Amy's birthday?
Ty and Amy haven't exactly made up now did they?? Well, chop chop!
LOL!
Literacy Actress 2008-03-08 . chapter 5
Action-packed!! I love it!! But, Ty and Amy haven't exactly got together yet, have they?
Literacy Actress 2008-03-08 . chapter 3
Ok, will Ty and Amy go back together? I don't like the sound of Sasha nor Jason -- [sigh]!
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