 sargentaaron2004 2009-11-25 . chapter 17UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! NOW!
PLEASE! |
 angle320 2009-11-09 . chapter 17 i love it please wirte more |
 Andrew Hildreth 2009-11-04 . chapter 17Glad to see that you introduced Dick Grayson as Nightwing, finally. I could see it coming when you started mentioning the hair being grown out. I still find it so interesting that you made Jason Todd into Red X, and that he is now an ally to Robin/Nightwing. I'm not sure if I approve of Dick's "no holds barred" attitude, though. He was always the straight-arrow. The Batman trained him well. However, I'm glad to see that he and Raven are getting together well. I cringed when you gave Raven that painful abortion, though...That was horrifying... Great story! Can't wait for more! |
 Andrew Hildreth 2009-11-03 . chapter 4As a die-hard Batman fan, I have to say that you're really not doing much justice to Jason Todd's memory. The boy died a hero, trying to save his mother from the Joker, who murdered them both anyway, and you've turned him into a villain! I'm not trying to flame you down or ruin your creativity, because the story's good, but turning a Robin, even a hot-headed one, into a bad-guy...it just doesn't sit well with me. Although, I guess I should have seen it coming. The knowledge of Batman's fighting style, Dick's secret identity, they were all there. Jason was bright enough to figure it out. Good story. |
 Kashira Hibana 2009-10-29 . chapter 17 I'm keeping up with this story and it's great! So please keep it up! I want to read how Nightwing will win and about his happy ending with Raven!
Great job turning Robin into Nightwing now that things are seriously changin in his life! It was an unexpected but brilliant move.
Again, great job and keep it up!
~Kashi |
 morphious444 2009-10-25 . chapter 17OMG OMG OMG! AWESOME CHAPTER! oh, wait, let me introduce myself. My screen name is morphious4. i started reading this story two days ago and i got hooked. i love the plot by the way. though i think your writing too fast because i noticed some words have the letters mixed up. hm... anyways... i LOVE the red x idea. though the nightwing idea is a little cheesy. so please update soon cuz i am very impatient and i have a tendancy to go crazy after a while. jkjk lol. but seriously, please update. or else i will end up in arkam asylum. get it, get it? from the new game that came out? ah, forget it. |
 Nydia 2009-10-23 . chapter 17 I absolutely love this story! And I tickled that you have changed Robin to Nightwing! He gets darker, thus the story is bound to be darker :-D |
 tiger_Eyes90 2009-10-23 . chapter 17 ahh finally read the entire thing
(took me like 4 days)
XD
glad to see robin's transition into nightwing
hurry and update! |
 Betrayed05 2009-10-19 . chapter 17loved it. please update soon. i mean really soon |
 The Shadow. . .okay, Lydia 2009-10-14 . chapter 17 This has probably taken about 60 days for me to read because I have never had the chance to just sit down and read it all in one go as I would like.
I haven't reviewed but seeing as this is the last chapter so far I feel compelled to.
This is a good piece of writing, but there were a few typing errors but meh, I don't really care about that, I just thought it would be good for you to know.
I like how you have included Batman villians in your fanfiction, it took me a couple hours to work out who Selina Kyle was when I first read the name and couldn't get the chance to read on.
Anyway. . .
Please upload the next part. I am interested to know how Nightwing is going to be beat Slade. |
 KoalaSnow 2009-10-13 . chapter 17hmm, very intresting. and haha "I got wet" from Rpbin. haha, i smiled at that :) see? haha, great job |
 Winter Bells 2009-10-08 . chapter 17Aw, too bad you are losing interest in this story because I love it, and so does the others that read this, I'm sure! But I'll cheer you on in finishing this. I want to see how this story will end, too. I love your work! And I will be waiting for you to update. |
 Winter Bells 2009-10-08 . chapter 16I love it! This chapter is what keeps me waiting for you to update! Waiting for them to finally be happy together! I am in love with this story! |
 Winter Bells 2009-10-08 . chapter 15I totally forgot to review since the last chapter, but I've read it all tho. I can't help but smile at them kissing, it was just very sweet! I love this story very much! |
 Hajimari 2009-10-06 . chapter 17 That was a good chapter but personally, I really think Slade isn't as dumb as that to be defeated so easily. But anyway, I look forward to your next chapter! :D |