aw! why no update? if youre busy understandable, but dont think there arent some people who wanna see more, eh!?! XD jk. take your time!! hope to see something soon!

This is pretty good. Though I wished you went into more detail with the Coeurl attack. Like do a flash back or something. Other than that I really enjoyed this chapter. I hope you continue.

Yay! A Basch x Penelo story!! Can't wait for another Chapter!

*flail* AIE, I love it! This is wonderful, I hope you continue with it! =] ♥

- hazel