Very nice, I liked the descriptions from Cloud's point of view. I thought Cloud knew this stuff already, but you explained it well, and the tone is just right, very thoughtful. :)

I'm surprised people think of this as a Cloud/Aerith story. I certainly don't.

Being what it is, it certainly isn't that bad. Quite good, in fact.

It's a story that I would have expected to be a bit more morose, considering the fact that ONLY forty-four years have passed and EVERYBODY's apparently gone save for the two of them. I may have read it wrong, but it seems he'd probably be a bit more distraught by those deaths than he is.

But that's an opinion. Take it with a grain of salt. Good job.

Quite a well written piece, my friend. I am sure you already know this, but it is the last line in particular that stands out the most, it is absolutely perfect... Wonderful work.

I myself am a diehard CloTi fan, but I liked your story very much :) You write very well, and this fic has a poignancy about it that not many can achieve. Very well done and I hope to see more from you!

This is very touching...I'm much more of a CloudxTifa fan when it comes to the post-game timeline, but your approach to this is so unique and genuine...it's far more than the traditional angst!Cloud fic. And I really love the way you've written Nanaki. Really just everything about this is extremely beautiful...well done! :)

Very good i think! :3 I'm not really a Cleris shipper but i liked this one and i think this story just might me get into that pairing as well! (I like pretty much all of them except yaoi pairings XD)

Very well written too! I look forward to more stories from you!

~MakoStorm