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| Awsomewriter123 2008-02-15 ch 3, | abuseAlthough short, it was an okay chapter. Please update! |
| Afoxtrotn00b 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abuseDear god. That was horrible. I have never seen someone make such an obvious Mary Sue self-insertion character. Edder? I'm sorry but he should not be good with the girls, be modest, know more than Edd and relatively strong. |
| Awsomewriter123 2008-02-02 ch 2, | abuseAlthough short, this was pretty good. Please update! |
| Awsomewriter123 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseDang, too bad for the cul-de-sac kids. Is this gonna be like a Lord of the Flies kinda thing? Please update! |