*flails*
:O
make another!
this could SO have a part two to it :)
and i like having yuffie with more emotions then just, annoying, as well.
Makes her more likeable

I really hate it when people make Vince into some love-struck dude and don't really keep the sad, locked away part of him the way it should be. I'm so glad you kept Vince the way he usually his, a bit dark and brooding, but yet a friend when you really need him. Good work!

Aww (:
kewl story.
Characters well written in role (:
Yuffie And Vinnie

You have the makings of a very good plotline here! I would love to see it continued.

PFF X3 Commenting because this was cute and understated enough, and when I watched AC, I was very tickled at the thought (prompted by how comfortably Vincent reacted to Marlene) that that freak might actually be good with children. Sad hilarity, that. It's like Vincent is so emo he comes out the other end as an ideal comic relief setting.

Great story!
Update!?
x

*squee* Cute! Loved it! Vincent is adorable. (Slightly creepy/dark/emotionally challenged, but adorable nonetheless.)
:D

Aw, I want a moogle doll...

Anyways, very nicely written. I liked how you wrote Vincent's thoughts, he seemed very in character.

I also liked the very subtle hints of humor (except for Apple to Apples- Vincent never lost a game of Apples to Apples - like that x3)

Well done~

COOKIE!...sorry, I ment to say that I liked it an awful lot and Yuffie's character was perfect. But if you have a cookie spare...

It was quite lovely. I love how you used what seemed to be Vincent's favorite word: Unpleasant. -giggles- It was really cute and great imagery.

Hugs! ^0^

This was quite cute! I loved how you kept the Yuffieness intact but also made the character change understandable, and even obvious. She was subtly no longer the carefree yuffie, but you didn't make it into an angst fest; you had her as what she was burgeoning into during the video game - someone who would gladly lead her country and enjoy rebuilding. You gave her qualities and backed it up with actions; awesome! loved this piece!

Your first Yuffentine is a success! You were right to stick with light Yuffentine because I just cannot imagine Vincent being...goopy.

I always wondered how Vincent walks with those shoes (they must be heavy!) and how he keeps his cool all the time. He's just...so cool.

Denzel likes to watch soap operas? That's hilarious. And Yuffie beat Vinnie at chess, what a pleasant surprise. Other fanfics always portray her as a bimbo but I like this intelligent Yuffie, a lot.

I suck at chess too; I don't get it and I never will. =P

Really enjoyed this, you portrayed Vincent and Yuffies characters really well.

Hope to read more from you soon!

YAY Cookies and onion Yuffie's! lol This is a really good story *Faves*
Now where's my cookie! XD j/k
I like how you out their conversation with Yuffie talking non-stop. Ask any one I know and they'll tell you I'm the thing that never shuts up.
And I LOVE the box of emotions!
Seeya and God Bless,
SunsetDreams

Liked it, very cute, and I thought you wrote both Vinnie and Yuffie well.