Great start to your story, I hope you update this one. I love the show thinking about Marie having Alzheimers is so sad, and even worse she has passed away. This is really good please continue.

Although I think you have a good story topic to go off of, I would have liked to read more of how Frank and Raymond reacted to the death of Marie. You don't really talk about how any of the characters are dealing with the situation. Also, you talk about Ally and Debra and Raymond's new daughter but what about the twin boys. Where are they?

This was a very good story. I liked how you added humor about Ally making mud pies. At some parts it kind of seemed that you repeated things. Like when Debra was hugging everyone. Why did you choose Marie to be the one with alzheimers.

this is a great story. I want to see how ray and robert feel and if it changes anything between them all.

Great start can't wait to read what you have in store for this story!

good start, i can't wait to see how you show ray, frank and robert are feeling. PMS :)