This is awesome. I'm saving this forever.

:D Great, again.

Lol! i love Red, he should be pranked regularly!

I read this aloud to my mom, and, even though she doesn't really get Transformers and hasn't read Jux, she was laughing her ASS off!!
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Brilliant!!

I love it! So cute! But what is Red covered in?

*headdesk* Sorry about that e-mail! I didn't look on the profile, I just looked at my 'favorites' instead. Sorry!

I'm at the college campus and I don't feel like logging in. This was really cute. Gotta go!

*Laughs* Cute. XD

LOL! Too cute!

That flows so nicely. The rhythm isn't forced and the story is complete and amusing. :D What did Sideswipe cover Red Alert with? XD

I laughed myself sick.

YAY, it rhymed . Love a good poem, and this one was funny to boot.

I really think Ratchet should give her a little remote for Sideswipe when he gets his body back *cackles*

Amusing, but what really happened?

HA! He so deserved that! XD

Yes better late then never and Sideswipe is so lucky that he is not found out... else there would be a great deal of trouble. GREAT poem thingy! LOVE IT!! Now would you PLEASE go update the main story! PLEASE!