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| mynameisme 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abuseLOL I love the idea of phone tag for these two! |
| Christina 2008-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseIs it next week yet? |
| PatriotJackie 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was brilliant! You captured so much about their relationship in such short little bits of conversation! Really, very well done! |
| Devilish Me 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is great. Liked the way they communicate, and the end of the last conversation was just so good. |
| Thara June 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseReally good ... I really liked the way they talked to and teased each other ... thx |
| ????? 2008-01-17 ch 1, anon. | abusehope to see a sequel. |
| mia66 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseI love it:) Is ther another chapter?? just one?? |
| Mrs. Pollifax 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseI love the way the style and form match the content here. It's like ... learning to walk, which they are, in a sense. Anyway, lovely as usual. |
| BettyHall223 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was good. I love it when Jack teases Sam. |
| gater62 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was very cute! I loved how you had them gradually move to a date over the phone calls. Smooth! |
| que 2008-01-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseWay too cute. You definately need to continue this. |
| SammieAtHome 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseLiked it! is there gonna be a next week fic?...lol |
| PatriciaS 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseNice set of reactions. Thanks. |
| LuSo 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseReally in character, very enjoyable, it's great :) |