I Loved this story it really kept my attention and with me having a very short attention span at the age of 26 it takes a lot to keep my attention.

busted by the boss

lmao

good ending to this wonderful fan fiction

lots of twists and turns

i dred the day you go back to work after your ankle heels

no more fan fictions from you

or a lot less

i will enjoy them as you heal

and great job on putting them up so fast

since i have got the chance to get to know you a little through our e mails i feel able to say this and steal carls name for nick:

gimp, keep them writings coming!

nick making penis jokes

got to love him

do you know i read the whole story with out making one R here

than i came back and wrote the Rs

your story is that good

and i cracked up when kate threw carl out of the house

jeesh i was expecting you to go and kill our nicky

your so lucky you didnt lmao

i love this one!

holy sh**

o my *

what the *

why in the *

i go from thinking it is going to be some hot make up sex thing

to another fite

to a car wreck

well consider my world rocked

as the damage control officer would say

you know how to write them!

who i like the hottub play out

very interisting

you kind of gave ol nick there a sexy aggresivness in a way

me likes!

omg i can just here nick now about the food

i love this one so far

very funny and on track with the characters

lmao i can just here them bickering back and fourth

super start!

AH! NO! The cliffhanger! Okay, now that that is out of my system, I think Nick really needs to read his partner better, if he could just keep his mouth shut every so often he would be much better off.

Aw...dejected Nicky. It was a great chapter. but all I can think is how much I want to have an all-night chinese place nearby

Goodness, the droolworthyness of Nick in a hot tub. I like the in characterness of Kate too, faced with this new situation I doubt she would be like, 'take me you stud!', this seemed very in character.

your fic is fantastic..please continue! , i really like