For the win. The world needs more f/f like this. You have a lovely writing style, and damn if that ending wasn't just about the loveliest thing ever.

Your prose is rich, y'know, and that kind of thing could totally fall over into purple silliness but you keep it /right there/ where it's just dreamy, and it's wonderful.

That was fab! You captured the characters well, and your writing stlye is smooth and flows well. No wasted words here.

I've been hearing about different pairings. This is the first JJxEmily I've read as I write JJxDerek. This was really good actually, not at all what I'd expected but better than I'd expected.

Excellent work!!
SLITH

The stages of grief, interesting take. I never would have thought to equate them but it works. Very well written, despite being a short piece it has good emotional depth. While I love them all I think Anger may be my favourite. Though Acceptance is good, too. Looking forward to more JEm from you.

Very sweet story. Love the last line. :)

Oh, this is beautiful! And so romantic! I could really feel with JJ.
And I love the style and the structure in five parts. Really good!