Amazing chapter. It may be fiction but it feels too damned real to me, my heart is pounding nearly as much as Sam's must be. And it's not the first time I've read this!

I like how you write Bobby, so protective of the boys. And it was a nice touch to confirm their cover story - I like that we don't have to worry about that and can concentrate on the important part - the H/C! great chapter :)

Kelly

Wow, gawd, this is so good. Both boys... so good how Dean was so hot at the beginning of the first chapter, then Sam is so cold in the ambulance. And Sam's thoughts about being sick of the life and saving the kids isn't even enough to make it worth it - seemed very realistic (*sniff*). Excellent stuff :)

Kelly

what is wrong with me, not reading all your stuff yet!?!?! This is a great start - I love when they rescue kids:) Can't wait to read the rest!

Kelly

Oh! This makes me so glad I read "Supernatural Origins" the other day. Otherwise Hunter and Fang would be really cool characters that I would not have recognized. But I recongize them! It rocks. This story rocks. You rock.

Great job. Off to read the sequel. Catch ya on the flip side.

My heart is absolutely bleeding and crying out for Sam. The raw emotion in this chapter completely blew me away!! I absolutely can't wait for the follow-up and I'm dying to know how you think season 3 should end! (jumps around excitedly)

That was heartbreaking...*sniff* Full recovery on Dean's part, they're both awake and talking and everything's rosy - but then all that sad speculation at the end was so gutwrenching! :( Sam's plan...wow...to sacrifice himself to the demons and then request that Dean lose all memory of him...that sounds just like something he'd do, but it makes me terrified that something like that will happen on the show! *cries*

So the Hunter's purpose was to point Sam in this terrible (at least in my opinion) direction? I was waiting for a happy ending the entire time, only to find the story wind up to this sad conclusion. I've said it before, but I'll say it again: you're evil!

I'll definitely be reading the continuation - even though the layout for your version of the season 3 finale seems unbearingly awful to me, I really want to see the direction that you take it. :D Awesome job on this story, and I look forward to reading more!

-laughandlove

Heya Merisha! Sorry I haven't reviewed lately but it was spring break and just didn't have the time.*guilty looking grin and shifty eyes* We all know that I am just a goody-little-two-shoes and was a prefect angel. Hey no laughing uncontrollable and getup off the floor! I was an angel! You done yet? OK so onward to the review...
Ok are you trying to break me or something because I am like choking on angst and it was done in just the right way, not so much that I want to gag at the sappiness but just the right amount to bring a tear and brooding thoughts about my boys(Fine I'll share them Our Boys). I still love the presence of Bobby because he just rocks. Overall, an excellent fic and I look forward to reading the next one.
Now I must go onward (super hero cape flairs out behind me) and do my calculus homework, wish me luck and keep up the excellent writing!!

You're back! Whoho! Awesome updates. I'm so worry right now. I don't like me evil Dean even though he's hot as hell. Meanie Dean scares little me :( Oh boy, Sammy should have listened to Dean. Now he have done it. Damn.

Come back soon. I miss you like the dessert missing the rain...

Mucho hugs :)

Really enjoyed this one and am now eagerly awaiting the next part.

Cheers.

OMG HUN!
you have so outdone yourself!

WOW! what a phononemal chapter!

OMG! you made me cry AGAIN HUN!
wow your so amazing...omg...!
just one thing … that Dean looses all memory of me. It’s the only way to save him from himself and the soul destroying pain he will feel.

I watch him sleeping until my own eyes finally close in exhaustion. I'm sorry Dean.

My big brother was right, he was always right. I have to face facts, there aren’t any angels, and they won’t save us and neither will prayers... but so help me, I’ll save Dean.

WOW!
i cried so much, your so brilliant to think of this hun!!
wow!

aw
it is such a powerful ending hun x
god you need an oscar!
THANK YOU!
what a great read x

That was sad but the set up is very interesting..Dean hurt Sam and have no memories of him..YIKES!

Look forward to reading it :-)

I wanted to cry!

Dean having no memory of Sam may work for a while but I get the feeling that Sam is ingrained too deep in Dean's soul.

Sam is his reason for living and vice versa, so he'll figure it all out.

I love this chapter, but it really tears at the heart. And that's what makes it so damn good.

Kind regards,
ST.x.

wow..that was intense...so well written...looking forward to your next one!