 cres-cres 2009-10-29 . chapter 5I ** love you.
You are an amazing author!!
can't wait for kuro's sequel! |
 Arch Dragon 2009-03-05 . chapter 5NICE!
Awesome story and what a way to keep the story going!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep WRITING! |
 tomoyohime8 2009-01-29 . chapter 5oh lol, i'd been under the impression that Millennia was the sequel to Kurokawa. O_o; i'd been trying to see how the two stories connected.
hm. i've never really gotten into the sci-fi genre of anything (unless if Star Wars counts), but this fic has a pretty interesting plot. Naruto's powerful, but not so powerful that he's boring. there's information overload sometimes, but maybe that's just me (college is sucking me Dry).
does naruto know that his father was the fourth Hokage? since Shikamaru pointed it out to him? i remember him commenting about how the whole coverstory about his being a Cloud orphan must be fake, and since it was phrased like he didn't believe it, i assumed that he wasn't really sure on where he actually came from.
all in all, i think i'm going to like this story.:) |
 tanith-4486 2008-12-31 . chapter 5nice!:D |
 Nixie002 2008-12-23 . chapter 5Awesome story!! I'm rather curious about what Itachi and Kisame are up to. But I love how you wove everything together so well yet it still has the original plot line somewhere in there. Please update soon! ^-^ |
 Mack 2008-11-26 . chapter 5 Oh my this storyid really good, probably the top sci-fi i have ever read. cant wait for the next chapter to come out.
i really admire your way of writing and that you can make the characters fit. great job. keep it up! |
 wolfey141 2008-05-07 . chapter 5i have a question is the original naruto going to be in this fic? I have seen some where he is immortal. and some fics where he is asleep for centuries. was just wodering bout it. |
 Dancing Dusk 2008-04-06 . chapter 5Personally, I'm not much of a fan for Sci-fi, but I really enjoyed Kurokawa, so I thought "why not?" Surprisingly, I find this fic gripping despite my adversity to the genre. xD Anyway, it really interesting. I'm looking forward to your next update. |
 Paosheep 2008-03-28 . chapter 5I'm really enjoying this story. This is the first one I've read where the characters personalities were successfully altered without feeling like they are out of place in the Naruto fandom (your setting has a lot to do with that).
As far as improvements go, some of your phrasing seems a little... off, I guess? While literally true, there are a few uncommon phrases that just sound strange. Basically the only thing to help with that is lots of reading, exposing yourself to different styles. Other than that, there are a few places which could have used some commas, and a few run on sentences that could be cleaner.
However, your story is by no means unreadable, or even hard to understand. It is imaginative, original, and compelling, and I look forward to reading more. |
 Mudheart 2008-03-22 . chapter 5PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE! WRITE MORE! |
 Knives91 2008-03-16 . chapter 5Good stuff. More please. |
 Mudheart 2008-03-12 . chapter 5 Please write more soon! |
 Twin 2008-02-21 . chapter 5 Never in my whole life I will ever dream of that Sci-fi and Naruto can ever mix but you change that in believe-able way too. Nice job |
 Chronos guardian 2008-02-20 . chapter 5Wow this story is like hot man, if this weren't a fanfic and you could publish it it'd be a best seller. |
 jgkitarel 2008-02-17 . chapter 5Hmm, interesting premise you have here. I detect a hint of Xenosaga and Xenogears influence, as well as Battletech, but you have a completely viable story going on that is more or less new.
Keep up the good work. |