hahahaha
he got more than he asked for.

awe that was just to cute... 5 stars.. it was one of the best fics i've read so far.

it was cute is there more

Ahaha! Cute and funny! I love it~

I thought I already left this a review. It was a fun read. Yay. Made me go squealy. XD

wonderful fic. I think I was almost melting too. Your kissing scenes were perfect!

i seriously loved this! :D
seriously! :)

Oh, yesh. Pure, oxygen-lacking fluff.

Hahahaha. I like your recurring motif. It always amuses me when authors use the same lines for the beginning and end.

You did a pretty good job with this. Grammar and all that technical stuff. The only thing that stroke me as weird was Sakuno's outburst. It wasn't as if it wwas totally OOC, but not completely in character either. -shrug- It's still god in my book.

I love Ryoma's arrogance; who doesn't? And I'm glad you showed it when they were kissing. Well done.

WAH!
I love it!
so cute! too cute! so sweet!!
ahahah... ahihih.. can't stop giggling!

aw this is going to my favorites^_^

I liked it, and I like your writing style. I wasn't sure if you were going to make it funny or predicable at the end with the question Ryoma asked Sakuno. Part of me was hoping he would ask something like, 'So... can I borrow your eraser?' or something equally asinine instead of the predicable date question, but oh well, I still liked this fic. =)

I can see how careful you were in writing this, but it still needs to be proofed a tad more, because spellcheck won't catch these mistakes. You have at least three occurrences of the wrong word usage because you omitted or added an unnecessary letter. I don't normally take the time to point these out to a writer, but I think you're the type to actually care enough about the quality of your work to go back and fix it.

"Finally, she manages to stutter something coherent out, thought for the life of her she doesn’t know how."
Change 'thought' to 'though'.

"She has to thin it over."
Change 'thin' to 'think'.

"He face flared up again, but by now she was used to that."
Change 'he' to 'her'.

I do think that it's a little fast to be kissing like that, but your fic put the biggest smile on my face regardless, so it's going into my C2, so more RyoSaku fans will read your works. You certainly intrigued me enough to catch the rest of your POT fics. Ja!

"It wasn’t what she had pictured her first kiss to be."

Beautifully done. They're... uhm 13? 14? So, I can picture them kissing with opened eyes cuz passion isn't really the main factor in really young teenage love. And Ryoma is just the guy who subconsciously analyzes everything around him (not like Inui who does it openly :P). So, it's expected that he wants to see her reaction.

Poor Sakuno! Ever the shy girl, she missed the question for a date! Or maybe her brain just malfunctioned when he asked the question :P.

Well, it was really good. Although Ryoma was a bit too... direct. Most people thinks he's asexual or at least completely oblivious to love affections. So, maybe Frenching her in the first kiss might be too... soon? Or he might have stolen a few peeks here and there at his dad's indecent magazines? Lol, imagine a perverted Ryoma :P

Till then
xoxo

Whoa! ^^ I only got to read this now! BEAUTIFUL WORK! :) Love, love, love it. It is so fluffy and sweet. For a moment I thought I saw ants crawling on my computer... Ahahahahaha! Please write more!

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hahha ... well this one was certainly fluffier =] ... ahh the power of cuteness turns raving fan-girls into piles of mush