I liked it, really. I was kind of hoping for the Sheik x Link pairing but when I was slowly seeing the Link x Zelda I was kind of fallen. But I quickly picked myself up when I saw it as it was. Continue writing, I really liked it.

Beautiful! I don't know if it's just me, though, but are you jumping from tenses? Got me a bit confused. Still, wonderful! Keep it up!

LxZ

Wow, that was really well written. And very beautiful... in a sad sort of way.