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Sephirotho
2007-06-28
ch 1,
abuseNot to mean insult, but Ra is the egyptian god of the sun. The one you're talking about (the falcon-headed god) is Horus, the protector of the royal family.

By the way, nice story! Why did you stop it? This fic is one of the greatest I've ever seen!

Please, continue!
JustWriter2
2007-06-10
ch 5,
abuseYay! Ranma is finally going to be able to see his mother!


-JW`chan ^-^
Otritzi
2006-04-09
ch 5,
abuseI like this Ranma...Being a falcon has made him different than your usual Ranma...I can only hope that he reveals himself to Nabiki soon...I'd hate to see him develop P-Chan Syndrome, like most Ryouga do.

Keep the chapters coming!
Chaos Lord
2005-09-17
ch 5, anon.
abuseI wonder what will happen when everyone finds out that ryoga is not the real ranma. Update soon!
Tigger-69
2005-08-10
ch 1,
abuseFantastic story I love the twist of having Genma turning into a girl and ranmas change in atitude by being a Falcon.

DO you think you will ever continue because I am realy looking forward to Nabikis reaction to Ranmas secret. the Comning of Shampoo but most of all the arival of the real nodaka.

Please continue.
DCWestby
2005-07-25
ch 5,
abusehmm... you should continue this story.. I really like it.. Very interesting premise you have here...
Jax9
2005-06-30
ch 5,
abuseKeep Writing!
Daniel Jess Gibson
2005-06-21
ch 5,
abuseI concur. Please write another chapter, I enjoy your characterization of Nabiki.
Anonymous
2005-06-18
ch 4, anon.
abuseHoly Crap!

Kuno hitting on Gemna!?

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Sopchoppy
2005-03-11
ch 5,
abuseI really loved this story.
Yuki Tsukihana
2005-02-09
ch 5,
abuseyarr, I really like this fic; it's a rather interesting "what if?" situation here, and I don't usually like those.
it's very well written, and I know you haven't been working on it in a while but... >.> please update? for your fans?
obsidian-fox
2004-09-13
ch 2,
abuseInteresting work, so far. I'll definitely read what remains. Unfortunately, it appears this is not concluded.
OokamiShiroi
2004-07-23
ch 5,
abuseReally a great story.I only wish you finished it.
Viper
2004-07-18
ch 5, anon.
abusePlease continue this story. I wanna see what happens next!
Zizzo
2004-07-04
ch 5, anon.
abuseBrilliant fic! It has a very distant plotline to the canon but isn't so vague that you can't laugh at what happens. The story is intracatly weaved melding together flawlessly, and has the naive (sometimes) homour of the Anime. One thing I like is you make R-Ranma and H-Ranma become friends with others and not force them into non-platonic relationship, which is all too common in Pokémon fanfics and suchlike.
I hope you can update a new chapter soon, I can't wait to read it when you do!

~Zizzo
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